Fic: Lazing on a Sunday Afternoon

[tikvarn]

Title: Lazing on a Sunday Afternoon 
Rating: R
A/N: Yeah, this isn't anything like what I normally write. You've been warned. 
Written for Porn Battle XIII

Comments

[leavethe_ground]

OH OH OH!! I haven't even read it yet and I'm super excited!!

[tikvarn]

well i hope it lived up to your expectations! :)

[margieruns]

I feel like anything I say will pale in comparison to my first reaction, which was pretty much a HEART ATTACK.

She's just not very nice at all to him hehe. In the best way ever. And I love it.

And honestly, even though I'm not a dude, I could feel his desperation...so, really, super effective *L* Very effective. May be different than things you've written in the past, and yet, it feels so much like you and your writing, that I'm not at all surprised.

Great job :)

[leavethe_ground]

And honestly, even though I'm not a dude, I could feel his desperation

Exactly! I could almost feel his pain.

[tikvarn]

She just likes making him lose it a little. He's always so in control.

[freedumplings]

This is wonderful! And totally what I imagine them to be doing... all the time! I don't know what I'm going to do when the show comes back and things like this are not occurring. Keep up the excellent work because you are a fantastic writer!

[shiba500love]

Yeah I'm with you I am going to be totally wrecked in June when it comes back and they are not all up on each other all the time. I mean c'mon look at the glimps we got of how they are in the last 3 episodes of season 2 and I know come June we will be back to lingering glances and maybe the odd touch. LiveJournal Sam and Andy need to be canon.

Seriously great post, Probaly not what I should be reading at work. At least it's on my phone and my wifi is off. Ugh... Keep the posts coming cant wait for more lovely porn battle posts and more regular fic from you.

[tikvarn]

i've read some of this stuff in some pretty inappropriate places as well... you just can't help it sometimes! :)

[shiba500love]

Hahaha! The best was reading McSwarek Porn (*cough period sex*)at the dealership while they did the oil change on my Jeep, the old snobby woman sitting across from me was totally judging me with her eyes even though she had no clue what I was reading or why I kept smiling and blushing at my phone.

Ummmm

[comearoundtome]

WOW *dead*. I was just really not expecting that and I was surprised in a really good way hahaha. It's so awesome that you went out of your comfort zone to write this. I love seeing this "other side" of Andy that we don't always see; the one where she takes charge and drives HIM crazy.

The teasing absolutely killed me but um, this part: He chokes out a laugh, impatient, and it is really, in all seriousness, hurting now. His back bows up once more, gets nothing. “McNally… come on,” he’s not begging exactly, he’s not quite there yet but… she lowers herself down again, impossibly warm just at the head - and then she stays there, unmoving.

MY GOD. THE VISUALS! lol. So so hot. Loved all of this!

Re: Ummmm

[tikvarn]

definitely, definitely out of my comfort zone.

i think andy would really like to drive sam crazy... and not just because she's a flaky rookie.

[loulabelle13]

This was most excellent. I loved every bit of it and was grinning like a fool the entire time. I especially love Andy trying to distract him while she ties him up as if he wouldn’t realize what was going on. Best ever.

[tikvarn]

ha, thanks! i can picture Andy trying to be all sneaky about it even though... hello! - obviously he knows what's going on.