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Kinky

Dec 17, 2008 21:09

Title: Kinky ( Read more... )

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cr1 December 17 2008, 22:49:41 UTC
Like how this is progresing , please update soon

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til December 18 2008, 19:23:39 UTC
Thanks for the feedback. Glad you're enjoying it :)

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caro_gsr December 18 2008, 01:27:49 UTC
ohhhh yey more!!!! This is way much better than the one u put on adult fanfic... I love how things are going and it would be a great time for Grissom's mom to make him see how he treats Sara :P
Please give us more soon

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til December 18 2008, 19:24:28 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you think it's better. I'm really happy with the rewrite : And thanks for taking the time to review :D

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tmschmitt1979 December 18 2008, 02:18:11 UTC
Cool chapter, introducing Grissom's mom in the mix. clever mind..lol. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more and may your muse keep inspiring you. :) Have a great day/night

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til December 18 2008, 19:25:23 UTC
Yeh I've been wanting to do a fic with Grissom's mom for a while, so I'm really enjoying developing her character. Thanks for taking time to leave a review :)

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ladylobo2 December 18 2008, 04:00:41 UTC
Love it! More! More! More! oh, sorry! More when you get a chance, please!

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til December 18 2008, 19:26:18 UTC
Lol glad you're enjoying it. My muse is being cooperative, so should have the next chapter up soon. :) Thanks for the review

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anonymous December 19 2008, 00:39:38 UTC
Oh! I can definitely see little old ladies taking over the world; I actually think they do on Christmas eve - Yay! Little old ladies rocks, LOL.
Anyway, I'm having so much fun and can hardly wait for the ‘third day of Christmas’… Hope you update soon ^^.
K.

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til December 21 2008, 11:56:24 UTC
Thanks K. I know too many ladies of that age to ever take them at face value again!! They have a scary way of making things happen that borders on mind control lol. Thanks for the review. Next installment is up soon. :D

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