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Cold Pancakes

Feb 14, 2009 18:33

Title: Cold Pancakes
Author: Fromgrissom
Fandom: CSI Vegas
Pairing: G/S
Rating: N to the C to the 17 :D
Disclaimer: I don't own CSI or else season 6 would have had a whole load of this in it.
A/N: Written for Valentines Day ficathon, prompt was 'Scratch'. Set late S5/early S6 after Grissom and Sara's first time.

( Cold Pancakes )

Comments 35

jessickuh February 14 2009, 19:43:33 UTC

You’re almost out of buttons.”

Ahahaha! Stupid horny man!

Makes sense that Catherine would teach *this* type of interrogation technique.

til February 15 2009, 09:18:00 UTC

Hey! thanks for the review! I've been wanting to write something along this theme for a while, but the muse only visited with the ficathon. As for Catherine's technique, it's not the sort of thing I can ever see being discussed between her and Sara, don't think Sara would approve of it in a work setting, but couldn't have Sara using it without commenting on it... thanks again :D

thequeenofsin February 14 2009, 20:54:01 UTC

oh my...

I love the thought of Sara being a scratcher (and a screamer) it's quite funny...

s'hot too... s'very hot...

til February 15 2009, 09:20:07 UTC

Yeh it occured to me that she might be one of those people who still think they can have polite sex right up until they meet the right person. Thanks for the review, glad you like it as it is responsible for holding up progress on Kinky! :S

thequeenofsin February 15 2009, 16:51:55 UTC

XD does this mean that there's going to be and update on kinky soon?

til February 15 2009, 19:57:33 UTC

Soon, my dears, soon...

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shippysdbs February 14 2009, 21:48:02 UTC

That was amazing. Very well written, especially characterization.

til February 15 2009, 09:21:18 UTC

Thank you, that's really kind, I do worry about my characterisation, the line between good and cliche can be scarily thin!! :)

anonymous February 14 2009, 22:33:20 UTC

Hot and funny! The button thing had irked me with Catherine but this was great for the geeks!

til February 15 2009, 09:23:03 UTC

Hi there, thanks for reviewing, I totally agree about Catherine, as I said above I can't really see her and Sara discussing it so it's a bit OOC, but I couldn't use it without acknowledging its presence on the show. Glad you liked anyway :)

chibs_87 February 14 2009, 22:38:09 UTC

Man, that was great. (And hot... can't forget hot...) I love how Griss has this whole speech planned out about how they can never work, and Sara just does not give a damn. And the storking of his face? That made me "awww".

Very good job. Me like muchly. :)

chibs_87 February 14 2009, 22:39:17 UTC

Storking? WTF? There's birds involved now?!

...I meant stroking... I blame my lack of spelling correctness on the smutness... ;-)

til February 15 2009, 09:40:00 UTC

LOL it sounds like some hardscore term that noone really knows what it means. "So are you into storking..?"

Anyway Thanks for reviewing, I've always got the impression that Grissom might have tried to back out at least once early on. Sara's comment in the S6 finale about 'go in for sex and get stung, pretty much every man's fear' was quite revealing I think... :)