Comments | tim_don_a_thon: Snapshots of Fall (part two)

lisacali in tim_don_a_thon

Snapshots of Fall (part two)

Nov 20, 2013 20:32

Title: Snapshots of Fall (part two ( Read more... )

[m]fanfiction, [a]lisacali

Comments 5

candyjbshsc November 21 2013, 23:52:18 UTC

Nice progression to the final image in your epilogue! Sweet, hot, nicely done. :-)

lil_1337 November 23 2013, 01:50:13 UTC

That was lovely. I can imagine them being very good parents.

ursula2 November 23 2013, 18:59:30 UTC

Great story to the snapshots. I think Timmy is right, there is never the right time for getting kids. I am sure Don and Timmy will be great and loving parents. Thank you for writing this lovely story, I have enjoyed it very much!!!!!!!!

storyfan December 31 2013, 12:16:55 UTC

I can see the guys as parents, especially the parents of a little boy. You did a great job with this story, giving us a slow build-up and a more-than-satisfying conclusion. This is a story I'll read many times, I know.

msmaxine January 2 2014, 19:08:00 UTC

I loved this story. The progression through the snapshots was wonderful with the perfect ending.