Critique

[timeinherhands]

Typical HMD post, please post critique, comments, as long as it's constructive and not just "LOL U SUCK".  Please make it something I can do something about, not just that you hate me.  Details are important.  Anonymous commenting is on.

Comments

[king_jester]

Miranda is the only one of your characters I even know, and you know I love her~ especially how you take into account the era she's from. That's often neglected by a great deal of DGM rpers and the fandom in general. Granted it's not exactly historically accurate but it's still nice to see.

Allen has really started seeing her as a sister that he needs to take care of, he can tell she cares even if she doesnt always seem to know how to show it.

[timeinherhands]

Thanks a bunch. I always worry about her characterization... ALWAYS. I love your Allen too. Miranda sees him as a little brother to worry about. 8D

[thefirstdoll]

Just reread the email I sent you waaaaaaay back when saying how much I love Miranda, and how awesome I think you write her.~ &hearts ^_^