oh my god oh my god this is my absolute fave part :
"When he scores, Sehun dashes over to the side and faces the crowd - mostly made up of Brazilians - then he stands proud with his feet apart, crosses his arms over his chest and grins smugly. Recognizing the gesture as one that Neymar used to employ when he celebrated his goals, the crowd goes insane at the provocation. And the cameras send that image live to millions over the world. Satisfied, Sehun whips around and catches the referee’s eye."
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"Sehun chuckles and spins around, showing Yixing his back again. Then his head turns back to look at Yixing again, with his eyes locked onto Yixing’s, Sehun lifts a hand to pat his back, hand swiping over the arch of his name, "
i am forever amazed at how you can lead me up to the exciting climax, Sehun's characterization : on point. and LOL at bored yixing xD. i just frickin love your simple wordings but big impact >.< love love loved it!!
this was so cutee. the neymar/sehun comparison is hilarious. and i love how self obsessed but also desperate sehun is here. i enjoyed this. thank you for writing!
i haven't read or re-read your fics for a while, so i practically keyboard-smashed and quoted every single line of these WIPs on my twitter (already credited to you!). the emotions described during those 2014 football scenes are so real omg i can picture and feel A LOT of things, how sehun's mind alternates its focus between the real game and his mind game, how sehun reacts to the attention each person gives him etc and yes side-kick jongin!! there are a lot of things i don't really get because it's football and i'm sport illiterate, but i love the neymar vs sehun comparison and sehun's pose after his goals lol. you're still brilliant as ever, if not even more. simple words, leisure pacing yet still intense emotion at times? i don't know how to say but. this. i love this wip even when it's never completed (until now) and i love you too
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oh my god oh my god this is my absolute fave part :
"When he scores, Sehun dashes over to the side and faces the crowd - mostly made up of Brazilians - then he stands proud with his feet apart, crosses his arms over his chest and grins smugly. Recognizing the gesture as one that Neymar used to employ when he celebrated his goals, the crowd goes insane at the provocation. And the cameras send that image live to millions over the world. Satisfied, Sehun whips around and catches the referee’s eye."
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"Sehun chuckles and spins around, showing Yixing his back again. Then his head turns back to look at Yixing again, with his eyes locked onto Yixing’s, Sehun lifts a hand to pat his back, hand swiping over the arch of his name, "
i am forever amazed at how you can lead me up to the exciting climax,
Sehun's characterization : on point. and LOL at bored yixing xD. i just frickin love your simple wordings but big impact >.<
love love loved it!!
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this was so cutee. the neymar/sehun comparison is hilarious. and i love how self obsessed but also desperate sehun is here. i enjoyed this. thank you for writing!
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i actually enjoyed writing the neymar/sehun comparison too much, haha. thank you for commenting!
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