Fic: Sins of the Father / Extended Scene

Aug 30, 2010 09:35



Title: Sins of the Father / Extended Scene
Warning/ Spoilers: Episode 2x05 to 2x08 if you  haven't scene them yet
Rating : NC17
A/N : I've always wanted to write this ! This is an extended version of the rope scene in 2x08 (or better known as the Bondage scene) I tried to imagine what could have happened between the moment Merlin shows Arthur the ( Read more... )

nc17, merlinxarthur, sins of the father, rope, extended scene

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ckll August 30 2010, 08:13:09 UTC
Gulp! Thud!
My Monday wouldn't start any better, trust me.
Now i will have these images all day and night and OMG! That was soooooooooo HOTTTTTTTTTTTT

"Oh God Merlin, get on with it." Arthur said in what he hoped was a commanding tone but knew that it sounded more like pleas
I imagine Arthur talking there :D
Great sexy story, darling, i save it.

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timetraveller90 August 30 2010, 08:22:58 UTC
Hehe No better way to start the week than with our two Hot Boys =D

Thank you so much Honey, I had lots of fun writing it (looks like I found a compensation in the waiting of internet connection getting fixed XD )

"Oh God Merlin, get on with it." Arthur said in what he hoped was a commanding tone but knew that it sounded more like pleas"

Hehe one of my fave bit, I also like the end when Merlin has ideas about the leather gloves, there NEED to be a fic about the leather gloves, I think it has become one of my new kinks XD

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ckll August 30 2010, 08:40:22 UTC
I was watching one episode and stared at the gloves and they are really hot, i must say, lol

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timetraveller90 August 30 2010, 08:42:31 UTC
Colin and leather gloves = me *dying *
It's just too HOT for words ! Merlin should wear some more often !!! Of course they're also hot on Bradley but you know how much a Colin Girl I am, don't you Honey ^^

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bjl_charlie August 30 2010, 08:28:24 UTC
OMFG.......
http://s49.radikal.ru/i124/1008/4b/484e5b2ae532.gif
No mop can help now.. I need new office...
Sweetie! This is just HOT AS HELL!!!!!
""You're sweet when you worry about me." he said in between kisses. " - AWWWW!!!!!
Great job, babe! Love this story!!!
I NEED THIS SCENE IN THE SHOW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

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ckll August 30 2010, 08:40:41 UTC
Hahah, your gif :D

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bjl_charlie August 30 2010, 08:51:17 UTC
But seriously :)) Totally my reaction :)))

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ckll August 30 2010, 08:56:39 UTC
Mine too, lol

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misssnowfox August 30 2010, 09:11:10 UTC
OH YES PLEASE!!!! Is sad that bondage wasn't actally involved, but that' where me groveling for a sequel comes in ;p well you managed to kill me again hun!!! GUH! Quiet!sex or the boys needing to be quiet is a huge kink of mine and I loved this fic!!!

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timetraveller90 August 30 2010, 09:13:46 UTC
Hehe Well I hinted at the bondage but they did not really have time at that particular moment but who knows, I may do a sequel if I'm inspired XD

Hehe yeap, Quiet!sex is also one of my kinks and I found a new one that will probably be in the possible sequel : leather gloves !!!!! *dies*

*revives you Honey : 6 days !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*

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pineapplepeople August 30 2010, 09:30:55 UTC
Um...wow...I think I'm going to have to watch this episode again. Soon.

Awesome story! ♥ ♥ ♥

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timetraveller90 August 30 2010, 09:32:42 UTC
Hehe Thank you !

Enjoy the episode, though I'm sorry to ,tell you they cut this scene while editing the episode ...

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rain_polish August 30 2010, 17:07:21 UTC
:D This is perfect, and so should have been in the show! I like the paragraph about how their relationship started, how they actually DID hug later that night after the "no homo, no hug" scene, and that once they kissed they couldn't stop. Gosh, they would be that way!

It's sweet how both of them have dirty thoughts about the rope, yet niether actually goes for it. Like they're still in the early stages, plus they have a mission to go on. Super hot blowjob there, it's dead sexy when Merlin teases Arthur like that.

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timetraveller90 August 31 2010, 07:26:10 UTC
This is perfect, and so should have been in the show!
Yeah I really can't understand why they cut it ... lol

Thank you so much for your great comment !
Yeah I'm still waiting for a real proper hug so I decided to give them one just a bit later ^^
Oh yeah, that's always how I've imagined them, starting kissing and once started they can nver stop ^^

It's sweet how both of them have dirty thoughts about the rope, yet niether actually goes for it. Like they're still in the early stages, plus they have a mission to go on.

Hehe, well, the way Arthur is looking at the rope always makes me think that he has totally other ideas than escaping for his quest. And I may write a sequel, once I'm confident enough with writing porn, in which they think back at this scene and well, put the rope and gloves to a better use ;)

Super hot blowjob there, it's dead sexy when Merlin teases Arthur like that. OMG Thank you !!! I was actually really nervous about that bit because it's the first time I write one, si thanks a lot ( ... )

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rain_polish September 10 2010, 18:56:17 UTC
Oooh, if you'd like to please do write a sequel! You wrote this wonderfully, I'm sure the sequel would be really hot. And don't be nervous about including more Merlin teasing Arthur moments. :D

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