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Labyrinth Love: Chapter 1

Oct 31, 2011 14:57

Title: Labyrinth Love
Author: timmii_luvs
Pairing: Yesung/Zhou Mi, More to appear in later chapters
Genre: Mafia!AU, Smut, Romance, Angst
Rating: NC-17
Length: 1 of ?
Author's Note: Beta-ed by the amazing kotahcola

Summary: Zhou Mi just came for some fun. He might have gotten a little more than that.Insert old best friend, shocking relationships, lots of fighting, blood, ( Read more... )

series: labyrinth love, g: au, g: romance, c: henry, c: yesung, fanfiction, c: zhoumi, c: siwon, fandom: super junior, g: smut, c: ryeowook, g: angst

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SPOT timmii_luvs October 31 2011, 19:07:40 UTC

For Kotah unnie

Just in case you wanted to spazz/gloat/poke at me to write faster/ect you know XD

MiSung!!! And a Spot!!! I LOVE YOU! kotahcola October 31 2011, 21:21:07 UTC

So, as you know, I'm pretty invested in this already. It's Zhou Mi and Yesung, for crying out loud! Who even puts those together anyway? *raises hand* Oh yeah...

This is super cool, and I love this universe you got going. And Henry!!! He is my not-so-sweet baby with hopefully (I saw the spoiler) a handsome Sungmin at his side (preferably in bed). Wookie is so hot! He's the man, but really, everyone should know that by now.

I'm so glad you are writing again! I missed you, and thanks for letting me read this first. If there is anything you need, you just holler and I'll be there! Love and Sparkles and Rainbows for you, my dear! <3

OMG! I LOVE YOU TOO! timmii_luvs October 31 2011, 23:03:12 UTC

Psh, /raises hand JOIN THE CLUB MY PEEPS XD

Oh, it is Sungmin and Sungmin no likely when he sees ZhouMi near his things >D (Okays, yes, he claimed Henry as his and you shall have to wait to see why ;) ) And they will be everywhere. On teh bed, in teh office, at the bar, in teh car, at one of Sungmin's meetings wait wut o.o
And Wookie bes very hot but no one really writes him all controlling and powerful (so he doesn't seem like it yet but he will... soon enough) and I really was just waiting for an excuse to write him like this so, yay!

I'm glad to be writing again too. It's a little saddening seeing all these awesome stories come out and you're just like, blah. I wanna write too ;____;
And you know I will call, seeing as you are the main push for this little universe I created <3 I'm rather fond of this one

Oooooh I get rainbows too this time 8D

Duh! Rainbows are Needed! kotahcola November 1 2011, 01:39:11 UTC

Yay! Henry and Sungmin...everywhere! Spread the love around boys! ^_^

I'm glad that my imaginary pull is creating gravity for you and this fic. Thank you for thinking of me to read this, because I love it! And I love you!

Of course you get rainbows! You deserve them! =D

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sujulovenl October 31 2011, 20:00:29 UTC

I never saw a Zhou Mi/Yesung-pairing fanfic before! So I got all eager to read it :3

So.. I read it XD And I really dunno what to say rofl. It was very good! And it makes me all shy XD I will keep reading this for sure ^^ Am looking forward to the next chapter ^-^

And I must say, Ryeowook just sounds awesome XD and Henry is just the cutest *-*

“Hell yes.” The two chuckled before parting ways, as the younger didn’t want to hug a recently sexed guy. <- this ROFL

Ah you really destroyed all of my common sense. I really dunno what to reply x.x Just.. awaiting the next chapter ~

And I don't have any plot-ideas yet, but once I know a little more about this story, and you do still need ideas, i'll see what I can do! ^^

timmii_luvs October 31 2011, 20:08:15 UTC

XD YAY FOR YESUNG AND ZHOUMI TURNING FAN GIRlS SHY ONE AT A TIME!

Dude, Wookie is one of the most kick ass characters in this story the way I've planned it out in my head >D And Henry, well he has quite a bit to handle on his part coughsungmincough woops, spoiler alert but it's okay, he makes his appearance in either the second or third chapter depending on if I decided to switch the two chappies

I destroy common sense o.o I didn't know I had super powers 8D And I'm always open for plot ideas since for me it's more fun to incorporate peoples ideas

Ah, comments make me happy like this --> 8DDDDDDDDDDDD //squeal~

amanda_clarissa October 31 2011, 21:06:06 UTC

Oh My o.O...That Was My First Time Reading My Yesungie with Zhoumi...

Intresting...and Hot! Upload Soon Kay ^.^

timmii_luvs October 31 2011, 22:55:30 UTC

Haha, thanks for reading ^_^ I'll try to update soon

harhar12 November 1 2011, 10:13:45 UTC

spot...?

mistresspsycho November 6 2011, 05:37:47 UTC

First time reading this pairing, and I have to say, you got me addicted.

Hot story, interesting plot, I'm hooked; can't wait to read more.

Thanks for sharing. <3

timmii_luvs November 7 2011, 00:16:31 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :D me and kotah are like on a mission to spread the zhoumi/yesung love around so I'm glad you want to read more :)

Thanks for reading and I hope you'll stick around to the end <3

mistresspsycho November 7 2011, 00:35:02 UTC

That is a fantastic mission. I approve. And I just might need to write some Zhou Mi/Yesung fics of my own. THAT is how much I liked this unexpected pairing.

And I may not always have the time to drop a comment, but I will definitely read more when you post it, so I do hope to stick around to see how the story plays out (with lots of sex, I hope <3).

timmii_luvs November 7 2011, 20:07:25 UTC

oooooh :D I do hope you'll write that story

That's alright, as long as you drop some comments every few chapters to let me know I haven't lost a reader then I'll be happy. It's just that comments of course encourage me and make me very happy. As for the sex, why yes, yes there will be lots of sex between many different characters and I will surprise you all over the place XD

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