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jillyson January 24 2010, 14:11:37 UTC
Oh, My! What has Gustav done with poor Zhan??? And with Nellie going off to Egypt, she won't be seeing Zhan for awhile, so she won't even find out what happened to him!
Now if Gustav wanted to make someone disappear, I highly suggest neighbor Claudette - what is in that French Nectar that makes those women so dog-ugly??? (I apologize to my dog)
Great chapter, Tina! I can't wait to see what happens next! Maybe Nellie can find a hot Egyptian guy and have a man in every port! Lol!

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tinag13 January 27 2010, 00:22:57 UTC
LMAO! Those French women in the game do leave a lot to be desired!

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mountainshade1 January 24 2010, 14:46:40 UTC
OOoo A foot in the door?! That Frenchman is up to no good, but darn he's hot. Love the tensioin in this chapter Tina, nothing like the thrill of the chase.

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tinag13 January 27 2010, 00:25:21 UTC
Hehehe... the chase is thrilling, isn't it? I'm glad you're still liking it! I'm hoping I can keep it interesting while still showing off some of the adventures in the game. ;)

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holleyb76 January 24 2010, 15:57:28 UTC
Tina, I am trying to read this this morning and I am having some loading issues. Argh!!! You hinted romance and I can't even read it!!!
I'll keep tryiing.

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holleyb76 January 24 2010, 17:01:53 UTC
Oh Gustav, you sly devil *swoon* I do love me those bad boys. Of course he's horrible for Nellie, but who hasn't done something/one bad for them once in their life?
I think I would be mad if I had to travel to Egypt just to decipher a riddle too :) Email? Phone? LOL!
Great Update Tina! Ican't wait to read more.

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tinag13 January 27 2010, 00:26:22 UTC
LOL! Well, it seems we have two Gustav lovers and everyone else is worried about what he's up to. Glad you like it!

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tinag13 January 25 2010, 04:38:02 UTC
LMAO... OMG.. I LOVE all these varying reactions to Gustav! :D Y'all are killing me here! Hehe... I'll come back and give individual replies tomorrow, but I just HAD to say the above! Hehe... *evil grin*

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