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Romance Versus Relics ~ The Adventures of Nellie Blye Chapter 13

Jan 30, 2010 17:48

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mountainshade1 January 31 2010, 23:40:40 UTC

Agh no Tina! You cannot stop it right there! So cruel! lol. Oh I hope we won't have to wait too much longer for chapter 14.

Loved this line: "... be throughly French kissed by a genuine French man..."

Yeah, I noticed the cot there too, I wonder what the story is there.

Like your new Nellie avatar BTW. ;)

tinag13 February 1 2010, 02:08:43 UTC

Thanks for reading, Shady! I thought I'd lost you since you didn't comment on 12...lol! Anyhow, if all goes well, there won't be a long wait at all for the next chapter.

Haha.. I just couldn't resist adding a line like that. Oh and thanks for the compliment on the new avatar! I felt it was time for a change since Nellie and her story is my new passion. lol

mountainshade1 February 1 2010, 18:47:23 UTC

No no, don't worry Tina, you hadn't lost me at all, I read chapter 12 and enjoyed it very much. Sorry for not popping you a comment, I have no excuse really other than being busy/tired/lazy - you know; the usual. *embarrassed*

pixx08 March 14 2010, 22:03:31 UTC

....I just read your warning at the beginning of the chapter. Tina I swear I'll pinch you if you make poor Nellie sleep with that disgusting Gustav.

Ugh! Look at him...hugging her, Gustav makes me sick.

OMG! That jerk off is intentionally getting her drunk...I have to admit though that that face he's making in slide 47 is very sexy. Hell I dont even thing poor Nellie would have to be drunk to jump in the sack with that face.

I should have asked this question chapters ago but I kept forgetting, What the heck happened to Zhang?

No Nellie! Get out of there, end the game of tonsil hockey and get of of there while you can!

What the hell! Is that a cliffhanger?