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aussie_karima February 3 2010, 10:08:33 UTC
~ Wow, it is hard to type with tears in your eyes, I truly hope she works it all out! I believe her heart knows no other, & will stay true!

~ Great chapter,Tina I thoroughly enjoyed it,I am so glad to see old friends! Read you again soon! :)

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tinag13 February 7 2010, 00:31:56 UTC
Aw, didn't mean to make you cry, Karima. lol I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading! :D

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holleyb76 February 3 2010, 15:41:21 UTC
Oh Tina, you little tease!!! I love Nellie's face in that second frame.
What a shocker of an ending there for sure. Serves him right.
Loved it!!!

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tinag13 February 7 2010, 00:32:49 UTC
Hehe... yeah, things are really heating up in poor Nellie's life. I'm glad you loved it. Thanks!

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jillyson February 3 2010, 17:57:10 UTC
Ha! I KNEW he'd be back! No one can walk away from Nellie Blye!!!
She needs time to think. She should go to Egypt. ;)

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holleyb76 February 3 2010, 19:52:33 UTC
Yeah, i think a trip to Youseff, I mean Egypt would do her good ;)

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tinag13 February 7 2010, 00:33:56 UTC
LOL.. Jill, you little devil! Actually, Egypt is next on her agenda because I think all the really cool adventures in the other destinations have been explored.

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mountainshade1 February 3 2010, 19:26:31 UTC
Heh, just when Nellie had made her mind up, he appears. No wonder she is cross with him. Great chapter.

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tinag13 February 7 2010, 00:34:59 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, Nellie's life is getting more complicated all the time. Thanks for reading! :D

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valpre1983 February 4 2010, 15:33:00 UTC
Wow...wow...wow...absolutely mind blowing chapter Tina. The beginning was tense, the middle was tense and the ending was down right tense. Damn Ho Sung for coming back, now Gustav has to take the back burner! Damn Ho Sung! But you gotta give it to the Frenchman, even Nellie knows, no man should smell that delicious...lol..that was my fav line in this chapter! Amazing Tina and I can't wait for C15.

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tinag13 February 7 2010, 00:37:49 UTC
LOL... who can resist a delicious-smelling man? *evil grin* I don't know, Val. Every stove has at least two front burners! Hehe... I'm glad you liked it! Chapter 15 is in the works, but I haven't been as gung ho about getting out as I have the last few chapters. The illness that has struck me is taking its toll and I'm so darned pooped! :(

It may take a few extra days to get it moving, but it will come. ;)

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