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jillyson February 17 2010, 02:00:21 UTC
Fabulous!!! It looks like our Youssef has a mysterious life!
It was fun to see Nellie being clumsy again - she's such a great explorer that it's easy to forget that trait!

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tinag13 February 18 2010, 06:11:27 UTC
Ha ha... that's for sure! LOL.. yeah, I thought it was funny when she tripped and it looked like she almost feel down the stairs. It's funny about that diving pool, though. At first I thought it was a fluke, so I made her dive in again and got the same thing. It was funny, so I left it in. :D

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holleyb76 February 17 2010, 02:09:13 UTC
Read it!
Commented over at DD.
My curiosity about Youssef sure has been peeked. Mob Boss?

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tinag13 February 18 2010, 06:11:47 UTC
He's mysterious alright...lol

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aussie_karima February 17 2010, 10:36:39 UTC
~ Mmmmmmmmmmm! Poor! poor, Nellie! Not only is her love life a mess, now she has to sort out whom she should work for or trust???????

~ She has to make some hard decisions soon! for her own sanity!

~ Loved it all, as usual! Thanks Tina, for the escape from reality!

~ Looking forward to more! Talk on DD's Soon! :)

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tinag13 February 18 2010, 06:12:43 UTC
Thanks Karima! Glad you're still liking it. She sure has a lot to think about. Wish I had her troubles! *evil grin* lol

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mountainshade1 February 17 2010, 19:14:16 UTC
Nellie is getting frustrated, her need for love is starting to affect her quite a bit.
Very enjoyable chapter. :)

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tinag13 February 18 2010, 06:13:27 UTC
Hehe... it sure is getting to her! Thanks for reading! I'm glad you found it enjoyable. :D

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valpre1983 February 18 2010, 15:33:42 UTC
To everyone who keeps saying Gustav is a creep, how about you look at the relic merchant? Now he's CREEP!

I think the Pyramid of the Sky is my fav in Egypt. I love the color and vegetation in there. Loved the chapater as always. Still no word on the Ho Sung mystery I see. I eagerly await it.

I knew something was fishy about that smooth operator Youseff. Either he's a good actor or a really good actor. How can he not know what his company is up to? I can't wait to see the way this one turns out.

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tinag13 February 22 2010, 18:11:40 UTC
LOL... the relic merchant is definitely a creeper! Ho Sung's whole story will be told . . . eventually. *evil grin* Thanks for reading, Val! I'm glad your enjoying it. :D

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