~ Oh, it looks like we have some action on the home front,& Ho Sung (; is going into action mode!
~ Great insight!
~ Tina, I shed a tear or two!Fantastic............I love your journey of discovery of this game, & this amazing story! (: Looking forward to more of the same!:)
Thanks Karima! I really appreciate your following this story and I'm glad you are enjoying it. Wait till you see the 'action' in the next chapter!
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Woooh! Nellie finally kissed Youssef, or rather he kissed her. I can imagine it was lovely, Youssef is a (seemingly) sweet guy - even if Nellie doesn't have strong feelings for him. He is quite the gentleman that he is not coming on to her stronger.
Love the collage you made showing Nellie's dreams of all the men in her life, it works really well.
That stuff with MorcoCorp is still quite strange, I really hope Nellie won't get herself into (too much) trouble.
Great pic on page 20 where Nellie is staring intently at the computer screen, I haven't seen an expression on her face like that before.
Nice that Nellie keeps in touch with Zahn, and good to see her pick up Francois Lambert's memoirs again, it sounds like you're planning to work them into the storyline.
Gustav is getting scarier and scarier, and eww that he has had that sort of relationship with his cousin
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Thanks for reading, Shady! :D I really enjoy all your comments and speculations! A couple of your questions will be answered in the upcoming chapter. Others will be answered later.
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Oh man, oh man. If that whole scene with Gustav and Collette was meant to scare me off him, it might just have worked. I have a bad feeling about this one and I sure hope Gustav is not BAD baddie. I knew he was a wee bit crazy, but now I'm starting to worry. This is not good...not good at all.
Ho Sung's finally growing a pair! Nice. Wonder what that phone call was about. Can't wait for chapter nineteen.
Argh! That room with the door puzzle was the WORST! I think that took me forever to get by. Anyways, moving on... Ditto to what Shadie said about the "kissing cousins" *ewww* And I wonder if perhaps Gustav has a violent history w/ concerns to women. I hope Nellie stays safe. *Squee* Yousseff kissing Nellie. He does seem like a gentlemen, but I am also skeptical of him. What exactly happened to the Relic Merchant? Can't wait to hear So Hung's story! What could possible justify his actions? Can't wait to read more Tina!
Thanks for reading, Holley! That puzzle was hard. It's why I cheated to get her past it so I could get on with story! LOL
Sorry about the whole 'kissing cousins' thing, but I thought it added an interesting insight into Gustav's background. hehe.. Plus, it at least was't a sister. That would really be.. gross! lol
As I said above, it isn't quite time to learn about the phone call, but another question or two will be answered.
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~ Tina, I shed a tear or two!Fantastic............I love your journey of discovery of this game, & this amazing story! (: Looking forward to more of the same!:)
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He is quite the gentleman that he is not coming on to her stronger.
Love the collage you made showing Nellie's dreams of all the men in her life, it works really well.
That stuff with MorcoCorp is still quite strange, I really hope Nellie won't get herself into (too much) trouble.
Great pic on page 20 where Nellie is staring intently at the computer screen, I haven't seen an expression on her face like that before.
Nice that Nellie keeps in touch with Zahn, and good to see her pick up Francois Lambert's memoirs again, it sounds like you're planning to work them into the storyline.
Gustav is getting scarier and scarier, and eww that he has had that sort of relationship with his cousin ( ... )
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Ho Sung's finally growing a pair! Nice. Wonder what that phone call was about. Can't wait for chapter nineteen.
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Chapter nineteen in is progress. Sadly, it isn't time to know what the phone call was about, but the chapter should (hopefully) entertain you.
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Anyways, moving on...
Ditto to what Shadie said about the "kissing cousins" *ewww* And I wonder if perhaps Gustav has a violent history w/ concerns to women. I hope Nellie stays safe.
*Squee* Yousseff kissing Nellie. He does seem like a gentlemen, but I am also skeptical of him. What exactly happened to the Relic Merchant?
Can't wait to hear So Hung's story! What could possible justify his actions?
Can't wait to read more Tina!
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Sorry about the whole 'kissing cousins' thing, but I thought it added an interesting insight into Gustav's background. hehe.. Plus, it at least was't a sister. That would really be.. gross! lol
As I said above, it isn't quite time to learn about the phone call, but another question or two will be answered.
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