OK, now that I have recovered from the initial shock of the last scene *fans self again* What an interesting expedition Nellie had this time around. The search for love is always good. I couldn't figure out how to get into the servants chambers so thanks for the hint. So many secret places to have a secret rendezvous. Nellie dreaming about her being the Queen w/ 3 handsome slaves makes me wonder if she is Queen Hatshepsut incarnate. I loved how you blended your imagination with real facts about the queen. It made it very interesting. Queen Hatshepsut was a lot like England's Queen Elizabeth, huh? LOL @ Youssef's outfit, but it did give us a good view of his legs ;)They were a good team for this expedition. I hope he is telling the whole truth about Delida and the resistance. Something tells me there is more to the story, but only time will tell.
Now, about the ending... Whose to say if they would have ended up together anyways, but it was nice of Youssef to fill the "void, deep within her... again, and again...and again" *grin*
~ Ooh la,la! I feel so hot for an unknown reason.............I am amazed, that the words themselves are still there, with all the heat they contain!Tina, you are wicked!Thanks, as I am wildly fanning myself!Think cool thoughts............ocean breezes!ICE! Ice is cold!
That was a brilliant chapter by the way, and I loved all the history. I was so disappointed when I went to Cairo that I didn't have time to see more mummies in the museum, Hapshepsut (is that spelt right?) sounds fascinating.
This was so great Tina, brilliantly written and great fun. And, yeah, see above for the ending. :D
Ooh, and I love what happened to the relic merchant! Genius!
Perfect timing Tina, just when I was in need of a good read for my lunch. :D
OOooh! Good job I had finished eating by the time the chapter came to that very climatic ending. Wooh girl, you really have a knack for the steamy writing - as well as the inventive and entertaining writing. Earlier in the chapter when Nellie was having that dream where; "At one point, Nellie was the Queen and she held ownership of three very handsome slaves...." I so wished you had made another collage, but you more than made up for its absence with that ending. *fanns self*Ha! to Fahad Madbouli shoveling camel dung. :D
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What an interesting expedition Nellie had this time around. The search for love is always good.
I couldn't figure out how to get into the servants chambers so thanks for the hint. So many secret places to have a secret rendezvous. Nellie dreaming about her being the Queen w/ 3 handsome slaves makes me wonder if she is Queen Hatshepsut incarnate.
I loved how you blended your imagination with real facts about the queen. It made it very interesting. Queen Hatshepsut was a lot like England's Queen Elizabeth, huh?
LOL @ Youssef's outfit, but it did give us a good view of his legs ;)They were a good team for this expedition.
I hope he is telling the whole truth about Delida and the resistance. Something tells me there is more to the story, but only time will tell.
Now, about the ending...
Whose to say if they would have ended up together anyways, but it was nice of Youssef to fill the "void, deep within her... again, and again...and again" *grin*
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This was so great Tina, brilliantly written and great fun. And, yeah, see above for the ending. :D
Ooh, and I love what happened to the relic merchant! Genius!
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OOooh! Good job I had finished eating by the time the chapter came to that very climatic ending. Wooh girl, you really have a knack for the steamy writing - as well as the inventive and entertaining writing. Earlier in the chapter when Nellie was having that dream where; "At one point, Nellie was the Queen and she held ownership of three very handsome slaves...." I so wished you had made another collage, but you more than made up for its absence with that ending. *fanns self*Ha! to Fahad Madbouli shoveling camel dung. :D ( ... )
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