[Fanfic] - Beach Comber

Mar 01, 2011 23:14

Title: Beach Comber
Characters: Sweden/Norway
Rating: PG?
Notes: This one time I thought Yuu was gonna have a sucky day, and then he did.
Warnings: I can't write cute things, accents.

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I need to not name things after songs. )

pairing: norway/sweden, fanfic, *hides forever*, vomiting rainbows

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yuuago March 2 2011, 04:33:09 UTC
Bro, I think I'm in love with you.
That you would -- I just -- holy shit I can't get over it, this is the nicest thing anyone's done for me in a while, I just am completely incoherent right now, holy shit.

I'm going to have to re-read this again in the morning because I think I'm too happy to absorb everything properly right now.

"Gonna prance 'round in th' ocean, are ya?"
Made me lose my shit. Oh, Norway.
I like how you managed to get at the playful side of him. I mean, he does have one, and I love seeing it. And it seems like I don't come across it enough in fic, I dunno'.

And then that last bit -- the very end -- that one simple gesture, it's so... Well actually it made me blush a bit even though it isn't much, really, compared to some things, but it's just so--- well, it's romantic, and suiting for them, and suiting that Norway would understand everything perfectly at that, and then ending with just those two words just works so well, and--

Sorry, I'm incoherent. Er.
I just really, really love you right now, man. Really. <3

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No appropriate icon. tinediserp March 2 2011, 04:45:08 UTC
l;fakdjf Yuuuuuuu stop being cute with your incoherent and now this comment has me incoherent 'cause you actually liked it and I didn't know if you would and uh /KEEPS HIDING AFTER THIS ;3;

Also whitetext.

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Re: No appropriate icon. yuuago March 2 2011, 04:47:00 UTC
But DEEEEEEEEERP I can't stop being incoherent, sob.
But yes, I enjoyed it. It's lovely.

[/chases after you for hugs]

.... laksjdflkjsdkfdf
Oh, right, I'd forgotten you finally figured out how to whitetext properly. :)a

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Re: No appropriate icon. tinediserp March 2 2011, 04:52:02 UTC
/hides hides hides

Didn't think I'd finish before you went to bed and the tone shifts anyhow then.

:l

Hey. On a Mac it's perfectly fine. Bl

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mennybeads March 2 2011, 09:34:18 UTC
this was adorable, I always love their accents, especially when it's on Norway. Very powerful, with just a few words!

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Comment notifs have been derpin', yeah? tinediserp March 3 2011, 10:30:32 UTC
WAH why thank you!

Yeah, the accents are actually what first got me into the Nordics.

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asdfghjkåæpøæåpøoøihf ravn90 March 2 2011, 20:20:47 UTC
eeeeeee
ILOVEYOU

this was so beautiful. I really liked how you portraied Norway's rahter playfull yet snarky humour - it fits so perfectly!

Norway seems to jsut read Sweden's mind and that is beyond cute in this fic :D

keep up the awesome work
(and perfect posting timing, you just help destress me so much <3 )

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SAME TO YOU tinediserp March 3 2011, 10:35:34 UTC
I had no idea you liked Norway/Sweden. Welp!

Daaaaaw you're so cute! Yeah - in my head Norway's pretty hilarious (in his weird way) if you can manage to get him to chill out.

ONE OF THESE DAYS I shall write a Nordic fic not from Denmark or Sweden's POV.

Thank you, darlin' o/

(Oh no! /scoots to your LJ)

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Re: I HOPE YOU APPRECIATE THE BUTTON MASH! I DO IT FOR YOU ravn90 March 3 2011, 10:54:06 UTC
I can't really help it! there's just something about them! XD

well...us Norwegians ARE known for having a VERY odd sense of humour...that sadly does not translate well *sight* the amount of times people take offense to my jokes are endless.
(yes,I do need to start being less of a sarcastic bitch. but still! )

I SHALL BE WAITING FOR THAT FIC
IN GREAT ANTICIPATION
*cheers you on*

Bare hyggeligt vennen <3

(stupid philosophy essay Bl it is due in...4 hours...XD )

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richuninja March 2 2011, 23:22:10 UTC
This one was just soooo sweet!!! I love it!! o^^o

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tinediserp March 3 2011, 10:38:18 UTC
:3

Why thank you!

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richuninja March 5 2011, 03:18:06 UTC
your very welcome! *^^*

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m_dono June 11 2011, 00:07:54 UTC
Was looking at this while reading: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=18776622

And because the song features a role~ Also had this in the background:

NOW YOU FIC HAS THEME MUSIC! AIN'T THAT LOVERLY???

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