Title: Beach Comber Pt. II Characters: Norway/Sweden Warnings: Frottage, handjobs - my writing - you know - with the dashes everywhere - I should work on that - like, for real. Notes: UN-F-LOCKED AND EDITED.
Aside from the fact that it's Sweden/Norway and awesome by default, I loved the way you made the scenery work here! It brought in so many extra sensations and parallels and contrasts. Also interactions between Sweden and Norway, both here and in the first part, are a pleasure to read as they are IC and... subtly telling. Them being a couple seems very natural here, and that's coming from a person who is all over their platonic relationship but has trouble seeing it in the romantic light. :)
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Hahah I haven't had a computer to call my own for a few months, so now that I have one to borrow I'm uploading things like a maniac.
Ha well the first part miiiight make it make alittle more sense, but it's not entirely necessary. Thanks! o/
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So yep, thank you, I really enjoyed the story!
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