[Fanfic] - Beach Comber Pt. II

Jun 09, 2011 07:20

Title: Beach Comber Pt. II
Characters: Norway/Sweden
Warnings: Frottage, handjobs - my writing - you know - with the dashes everywhere - I should work on that - like, for real.
Notes: UN-F-LOCKED AND EDITED.

Oh yeah people like cuts and stuff. )

pairing: norway/sweden, fanfic, me = epic fail, this is porn

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tinediserp June 9 2011, 12:46:45 UTC
Holy shit you're fast.

Hahah I haven't had a computer to call my own for a few months, so now that I have one to borrow I'm uploading things like a maniac.

Ha well the first part miiiight make it make alittle more sense, but it's not entirely necessary. Thanks! o/

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tinediserp June 9 2011, 13:02:00 UTC
Fuuuuuu I LOVE Spain/France. Not enough of that in the world.

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const_victoria June 9 2011, 19:23:57 UTC
Aside from the fact that it's Sweden/Norway and awesome by default, I loved the way you made the scenery work here! It brought in so many extra sensations and parallels and contrasts. Also interactions between Sweden and Norway, both here and in the first part, are a pleasure to read as they are IC and... subtly telling. Them being a couple seems very natural here, and that's coming from a person who is all over their platonic relationship but has trouble seeing it in the romantic light. :)

So yep, thank you, I really enjoyed the story!

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tinediserp June 10 2011, 10:48:06 UTC
WHOA not even sure how to respond to this comment properly except perhaps with keysmashing, so I'll just say thank you very much!

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