✎ fanfic - supernatural - birds were singing to calm us down [NC-17]

[tinfoiltennis]

Title: birds were singing to calm us down
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: future!Dean and future!Castiel
Pairing?: Dean/Castiel
Rating: NC-17. It's angsty porn, mmkay.
Summary: Of course Dean would wind up getting caught in a hotspot one of those days. And, of course, of fucking course, he would wind up getting stuck with Cas.
Word Count: 3517

Comments

[sempiternities]

Jeez, this fic is just absolutely delicious! And when I say that I'm of course talking about the entire dynamic between Dean and Castiel and about how they're so equally messed up in such different ways... and not about the porn. Not at all. About. The porn.......... Oh god, THE PORN!! I mean, is withdrawel sex even an existing kink? Because otherwise this fic sure makes it one! XD

[tinfoiltennis]

Oh lord, I'm going to try not to keysmash too much at you (it's a bad habit I have when I get such lovely comments), but thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I actually have.... no idea if withdrawal!sex is an existing kink, but if it works... :'>

[skimthesurface]

Hurt and angry and sad and f****d up yet so very Dean and Castiel and very hot. One little thing; when they started kissing I couldn't help but think about Castiel retching earlier so I tried to ignore that or insert a water bottle into the scene.

[tinfoiltennis]

Ooo right, thanks for pointing that out to me. If it helps, when I was writing this in my head Cas didn't actually throw anything up, just did that thing where your body goes to throw up but nothing comes, but I guess the problem with writing is that if you can't convey something right, what's in your head just doesn't make it to everyone else's. XD Again, thanks for pointing that out to me! I'll definitely keep it in mind if I ever write something else like this in the future. Otherwise, I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the fic, and thanks for the comment. ^^

[mulder200]

Wow! Angsty and hot and broken!

[tinfoiltennis]

All things I was going for! ^^ Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[marourin]

<3 you captured the desolation that makes this verse so intriguing. I commend you.

[tinfoiltennis]

I am so glad to hear that! I usually tend towards the lighter and softer part of any fandoms I'm in, so to hear that I can pull off the sheer hopelessness that something like the 2014-verse has is really encouraging. Thank you for the lovely comment!