I really like your diner banter. I was a little leery of your first chapter just because I don't see Justin as the jealous type--especially not over some boy--but I think your dialog is really good and it will be fun to see what happens next!
Thanks for directing me here, tink:) Just got your mail and my printer is working as I write. Looooove your story and the fact that Justin leaves everything and comes... might be a clever decision. Looking forward to the next update Nicki
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Just got your mail and my printer is working as I write. Looooove your story and the fact that Justin leaves everything and comes... might be a clever decision. Looking forward to the next update
Nicki
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dunno bout tim, can't wait to see where we're going with him!
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