Surprise Visit ch 2

May 14, 2005 23:47

Sorry this took so long. Finals Suck! Anyway, I hope you enjoy! Let me know if you like it.

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wuziwug May 15 2005, 07:18:52 UTC
I loved it! So funny and good! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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tink821 May 15 2005, 07:56:10 UTC
Thanks. Once school is done, I'll faster with my updates.

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itsjustkristen May 15 2005, 07:22:53 UTC
I felt like I was THERE at the diner - watching that hot little scene! Wow! Thanks for posting!

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tink821 May 15 2005, 07:42:53 UTC
Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.

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darksylvia May 15 2005, 07:49:51 UTC
I really like your diner banter. I was a little leery of your first chapter just because I don't see Justin as the jealous type--especially not over some boy--but I think your dialog is really good and it will be fun to see what happens next!

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tink821 May 15 2005, 07:55:17 UTC
Thanks. I wasn't trying to make Justin jealous but annoyed. I'm glad you liked the second chapter.

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arrowthroughme May 15 2005, 09:30:25 UTC
Thanks for directing me here, tink:)
Just got your mail and my printer is working as I write. Looooove your story and the fact that Justin leaves everything and comes... might be a clever decision. Looking forward to the next update
Nicki

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tink821 May 15 2005, 17:45:10 UTC
No problem:) I'm already working on the next chapter!

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princesskirsty May 15 2005, 16:38:44 UTC
that was hotttttttttttt! *sighs* i need to get me one of them boyfriend thingys.

dunno bout tim, can't wait to see where we're going with him!

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tink821 May 15 2005, 17:43:33 UTC
LOL. I think we all need one of them boyfriend thingys!!!

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