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tinkrella25

Prequel to As Lovers Go 5

Feb 08, 2011 13:19

April 2011 ( Read more... )

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biba79 February 8 2011, 19:52:50 UTC

Awww, poor David. At least Emily was there for him.

Very good chapter!

muzakys February 8 2011, 21:07:20 UTC

Wow, what an emotional chapter. You did a great job imparting all those conflicting feelings for both of them. And kudos for including all the real life elements and still making them both sympathetic. Thanks for the update.

nyre1 February 8 2011, 21:29:56 UTC

Great chapter can't wait for the next one. That sexual harassment suit is a real witch hunt led by the worlds leading bottom feeder (b)witch.

But better times are ahead for all I'm sure. Especially here.

So for the three of us can I just add GO FLYERS!!!!

tiffie_90 February 8 2011, 21:53:16 UTC

There are so many conflicting feelings and thoughts going on here but it was so good.

Great seeing another update from you! :)

likeiluvj_d February 9 2011, 05:24:46 UTC

Loved the emotions in this chapter, felt for the both of them.