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tinkrella25

Prequel to As Lovers Go 8 part 2

Mar 27, 2011 15:14

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nyre1 March 27 2011, 20:51:09 UTC

Love it? Hate it? How can you ask of course I love it. I know Michael has to still be a part of this story but oh how I wish she had gone with her heart just then and ignored it and saved both of them all the pain. This is really showing us how she had so much strength to stand against her parents and sister and stand with David. Only SHE knew what he had done for her. What is theirs is theirs. This is such a beautiful story and I love the way it was done with the re-quell bring written after the main event.

On another tack HOW ABOUT OUR FLYERS!!!!! Clenched a playoff position already! Go Flyers!!!!!

tinkrella25 March 28 2011, 00:26:53 UTC

haha well, you know....some people might not like it. I don't want to be cocky and assume everyone loves it ;)

GO FLYERS! I'm so glad they are already in. I bet David is happy!

You do bring up a great point about her family and sister. I really wanted to shed some light on all David has done to make himself better before she agreed to be with him. I can't wait until I can write the parts where she is pregnant with Claire because it will be so much interesting now that we have the back story!

biba79 March 27 2011, 20:56:09 UTC

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

I loved their kiss, it sucked that her boyfriend interrupted. haha!

I'm looking for the fall out, and I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Thanks.

gemlily5 March 27 2011, 22:20:46 UTC

This was really good.The end of the show will be something for them to deal with. Something to think about much later.I liked it alot.

cleaninggirl March 27 2011, 23:02:52 UTC

Oooh you know I loved it and am now looking forward to the fallout to happen. Even though I know they do get together in the end I still feel all angsty wondering if they will get together and how that will happen with so many things in their way such as David's past, Michael, Jaime, Emily's pregnacy ect. Damn your good *lol* looking forward to the next chapter and I gotta say I love the fact that David cooked Emily a vegan meal not many people would do that for us vegans (I only get 1 vegan meal a week cooked for me by my Mom on a Sunday) and damn their kiss was HAWT!!

Also I am feeling the need to make some Demily icon prettyness ;)

tinkrella25 March 28 2011, 00:29:20 UTC

I feel ya girl. I'm a gluten free (I've got a wicked wheat allergy) vegetarian and the way to my heart is definitely to cook me a meal I can eat! I knew I had to write it in. Especially since in the later parts of the story, he doesn't cook all vegan.

I love that you are all angsty wondering how they will get together. I guess...I don't really show that in the future part of the story. It kinda jumps from him agreeing to be the 'baby daddy' to them as a couple. I'm excited to write it!

yay for you feeling ready to make icons!!

tiffie_90 March 28 2011, 13:48:52 UTC

Do you even have to ask if we loved or hated it?

I love how even from the start he knows it could never be just a one time thing with them. It would never be just casual because there's already so much there.

And a mention of the end of the show. As sad as it is, I think about that all the time. I mean, I assume they'll stay friends but they won't see each other as often, and then what happens in a couple of years you know? Anyway. I should stop before I depress myself too much, lol. Great job! :)

tinkrella25 March 28 2011, 16:24:47 UTC

the end of the show depresses me greatly! The last David/Emily video interview it was mentioned. she teased she'd be rid of him...but, you could tell the topic kind of saddened both of them. Thats where I got that from!