Prequel to As Lovers Go 10

[tinkrella25]

 *Believe it or not, this is the second to last update before we are back at the beginning of the first story! That's so crazy to me. It wont be the end though, no worries. I'm going to fill in some gaps from the first story

Comments

[biba79]

I love love love love love this chapter!

I loved how Emily went to Zooey and all she could do was cry.

David at her door for hours wanting to talk to Emily was exactly what I expected.

They both felt bad and were sorry, so that's good.

Although I was expecting more angst, and for them to be awkward with each other for a while, I love angst, and I love when they fight. But this was awesome too!

Just two more chapters? That's so sad. :(

Are you ever going to write a sequel to As Lovers Go? Because I would love to see more of that.

Thanks again, lovely chapter. I'm looking forward to more!

[tinkrella25]

there is one more chapter until Emily finds out she is pregnant with Claire. Then we are back at the beginning of my original story, but I will write a few chapters to sort of fill in the gaps in between them. Like...when she was pregnant and stuff from claire's first year.

I'm not sure about a sequel, but I might write some one shot type stuff that takes place in the future!

[biba79]

That sounds cool. I want to see the pregnancy and Claire's first year. It will be nice to see what else happened.

I want a sequel, but I will settle for some oneshots. That's better than nothing, but I will be begging you for more every time, so be ready! haha!

[tv_fan_girl]

I love this chapter! It was totally sweet and very wonderful.

i really needed it after the day that I had today!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

[nyre1]

I have been waiting all day for LJ to let me get in and read this chapter. It was so worth waiting for. I loved all their confusion and need for each other.

I want to see them through her pregnancy and delivery at least. I can just imagine their faces the first time they hear Claire's heart beat, her first ultra sound. I can imagine David carrying that ultra sound picture in his wallet until it becomes dust. Maybe them going to birthing classes. When does David begin to think of Claire as his daughter.

Not asking for much am I. :)

[f_brennan]

can I say I definitely concur with you?

[tinkrella25]

hahah no you aren't asking much at all ;) he will deff be there the first time they hear the heart beat and I'm unsure when he will first start thinking of her as his daughter. You bring up a very good point I will have to give some thought to!

I will be filling in the gaps of Emily's pregnancy so there will be plenty of room for david/emily goodness.

[rainbowong38]

Wow, great, you update again. As I said before even what Emily's did is wrong, David shouldn't say those things to her. And here he comes, he come to fix things up. And Zooey is here. Anyways, I just love love love your story.

[tinkrella25]

I'm glad you liked him being the one to fix it. I was afraid people would be turned off because it wasn't Emily doing it. But, I just felt like David would be the one to bridge the gap and fix it. His words were worse than her actions In my opinion at least.

[likeiluvj_d]

Aawww, just wanted they needed.