They took turns crashing for a few hours on the couch in Peter’s office but otherwise they followed up every scrap of a lead that came into the Bureau, no matter how slight the connection or what the hour was. Tempers were fraying, faces were growing haggard in weariness and desperation permeated the office. Peter seemed to age ten years. Jones
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You've built the tension really well here. And I like seeing this from Jones' POV.
Looking forward to the next part!
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I feel kinda bad for putting them all through the wringer. There'll be some resolution in part 2 hopefully!
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