Fic: Mea Culpa 1/2

Oct 15, 2010 22:23

They took turns crashing for a few hours on the couch in Peter’s office but otherwise they followed up every scrap of a lead that came into the Bureau, no matter how slight the connection or what the hour was. Tempers were fraying, faces were growing haggard in weariness and desperation permeated the office. Peter seemed to age ten years. Jones ( Read more... )

white collar, fic

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daniel_shadow October 16 2010, 07:17:02 UTC
Wow loving this a lot. Great to see you continuing this verse.

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tinnuial October 16 2010, 08:03:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm hoping to have the other half of this up soon :)

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venetia_sassy October 16 2010, 08:58:59 UTC
*holds breath* Neal?

You've built the tension really well here. And I like seeing this from Jones' POV.

Looking forward to the next part!

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tinnuial October 16 2010, 19:16:06 UTC
Thank you! :) Hope to have the next part up soon!

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aelfgyfu_mead October 16 2010, 13:05:23 UTC
Even though I know how this comes out from having already read "Fragile," I can't wait to see the second half. I feel so bad for Peter and for Jones!

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tinnuial October 16 2010, 19:19:40 UTC
Thank you for coming back! :D
I feel kinda bad for putting them all through the wringer. There'll be some resolution in part 2 hopefully!

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deej1957 October 16 2010, 18:54:36 UTC
This was awesome, am going back to read Fragile. I see that you've done other WC fics and I've friended you so I can make sure not to miss any new ones. I hope you don't mind!

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tinnuial October 16 2010, 19:22:31 UTC
Do I mind? Course I don't mind! :D Thank you so much for stopping by...hope you enjoy the other fics too!

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kriadydragon October 16 2010, 19:45:45 UTC
Yay! A prequel :D Looking forward to more. Love Jones' POV. Update soon.

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tinnuial October 16 2010, 20:21:12 UTC
heee...happy to oblige! :D I just added the link! Thanks for reading!

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