THE AKAME MASS COMMENT FICCY THING REDUX! (#1)

[tinybars]

It's that time of the year...

Same as last time. You know what to do.

PROMPT. WRITE. PIMP. STALK.
Go!

You can: prompt even if you don't plan to write; prompt/write any rating from g to nc-17; prompt/write drama incarnations of akame. you don't need to be prompted to write ;)

This entry:→ Is always second from the top

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Just an attempt at a snippet ^^;

[takenoko]

Kame is hunched over the living room desk with a little halo of light crowning his bowed head when Jin pads sleepily through the door at 4 am in the morning, pausing for a moment to appreciate the tornado of productivity that is Kame at his most inspired, tensai-moments, as Jin calls them

Erm, it turned out longer than I expected ^^;

[takenoko]

Just as Jin has loosened the bathrobe enough to start easing his other hand inside, however, Kame suddenly opens his eyes and says, “Wait. Jin, Jin, stop a sec.” He is clutching at Jin’s arm half-heartedly, but Jin can see the determination working quickly to dispel the clouded passion in the young man’s eyes.

“Mm?” Jin hums, equally as determined to not go down without a fight. He starts caressing the recess behind Kame’s knee, where the skin is as soft as a newborn baby’s and just as sensitive. Kame fights to keep from wiggling.

“I was working, you know. On, on that- oh…” He pauses as Jin’s hand continues its foray into the depths of his bathrobe.

“Jin,” Kame protests, a little more vehemently once he regains his thoughts. Jin continues a slow descent downwards, petting with lips quirked and eyes decidedly not meeting his

Last part I swear!

[takenoko]

Kame snorts. “As if you haven’t thought of plenty to say while we’re in bed,” he says pointedly, and it’s Jin’s turn to blush as he remembers how much dirty talk he’d been muttering in Kame’s ear last night. “But, if you give me a sentence and then leave me to my work for half an hour, I’ll make pancakes for breakfast.”

Jin drops his fake pout and brightens. “With blueberries?”

“Alright.”

“It’s a deal then!” Jin whoops enthusiastically and swoops down to seal it with a kiss. Kame indulges him for a few long seconds before he breaks away, panting.

“Okay, okay.” -haa. Deep breath. “Your turn.” He stands up and maneuvers Jin around so that he can sit in the chair instead. With a firm push on the shoulders, Jin plops down obediently at the desk to take a better look at the characters’ situation

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[gingifere]

LAUGHING SO HARD AT THE LAST LINE. Oh Jin. This was wonderful! I love the way you see Akame and how snarky and relaxed they are with one another ♥

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[takenoko]

Hee, I'm glad you liked it! ^^ They are constantly snarky around each other, in my mind <3

Thanks for reading~

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[luciene]

Oh god. OKAY like my endless declarations of love are not enough, I shall give some more to you. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I love how familiar they are with each other and that Kame is still a workaholic even when it comes to HENTAI MANGA and Jin. JIN. and truly what is his unmistakable handiwork. It could have been NO ONE ELSE. adkjjgkjgjergsfkddf!!!

I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW. Thank you for writing and sharing ♥

I am friending you right now, if you do not mind.

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[takenoko]

Of course I do not mind! ::friends back::

This is the first time I've really tried writing Akame... not-quite-porn? XDD So I'm really glad you liked it- your squees make me full of squee also. ♥

And yeah, I realized that you probably had something more crack-filled in mind when you posted the prompt, but my gooey muse took over the fic and I could only put in that little bit at the end ^^;

And Jin and his collarbone are sekkritly one of my kinks too ^^

Thanks so much for commenting on every single post, you really are too kind <333

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[luciene]

Honestly this is better than crack, so I am really not complaining... :)

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[ayuzak]

This is an awesome promt, and you are amazing for writing it.

Reverse Kama Sutra ftw.

Thank you !

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[takenoko]

Hee, thanks for reading~! ^^

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[matchynishi]

oh god so much genius and that last line safldskfd killed me dead. Dead. XDDD

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[takenoko]

Hee I was between that and "go club get drunk you stupid shit," but I figured this actually fit in a hentai manga, so there it is. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

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[razberrycreme]

XDDDDDDDD your last line. Oh, oh. This was adorable and hot and *___* Really makes me laugh even more when I think about how bad Kame really is at drawing... XDD

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[takenoko]

Hee, thank you~ (and if Kame was an actual mangaka he wouldn't be able to make enough of a living to even feed himself XDD)

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[luciene]

ENGLISH. sdkfjkdgfgjg you worked in the English oh my god. And anything with Jin's sensitive collarbone is one of my big kinks (especially stuff that makes sex not work out...) but aargh. I love the part about them working and the shadowing around the limbs and god. Jin is not as stupid as he may look and that is fantastic.

OKAY I shall move on to the next one now...

Re: Just an attempt at a snippet ^^;

[luciene]

OMG I love this. I love you. This could have been SO MUCH CRACK but honestly this is way better. They are soft and beautiful here, and I love that Jin gives Kame presents on a totally random basis, your writing just makes it all come together in a beautiful way.

I know there is more but I feel like I have to comment on every post you make about this. adjkfkdlrjgerkgergs I LOVE YOU ♥