THE AKAME MASS COMMENT FICCY THING REDUX! (#1)

[tinybars]

It's that time of the year...

Same as last time. You know what to do.

PROMPT. WRITE. PIMP. STALK.
Go!

You can: prompt even if you don't plan to write; prompt/write any rating from g to nc-17; prompt/write drama incarnations of akame. you don't need to be prompted to write ;)

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[takenoko]

Ueda is interrupted at this point by a great splash. They both turn at the noise, and are greeted by the sight of a slender young boy, with wet curls and glistening new human skin, standing waist-deep in the water.

“Holy shit,” Kame, the former turtle gasped, blinking drops of seawater from his eyes. “It’s fucking freezing in here!”

Jin’s jaw drops. He tugs on one of Ueda’s frilly purple sleeves and points silently at the miracle before them. Ueda nods, equally as surprised but trying to hide it. “It…worked,” Ueda said, stating the obvious. “It worked! I’m a genius!” he cried joyfully, turning in triumph to the boy next to him.

But Jin is already gone, kicking off his shoes and wading full speed into the water, heedless of the strong waves that threaten to knock him over.

“You!” Kame exclaimed, when their eyes met. “What were you thinking, throwing me into th- oof!” At this point Jin bowls him over with a full-body tackle and they both go down. When they resurface Jin’s arms are wrapped tightly around the other boy, who is

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[orange_smaug]

Jin's inadverdant genius saves the day XD. Loved this adorable fic, thank you so much for taking the time to write it ♥.

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[takenoko]

Hee, thanks so much for reading and commenting <3

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[flamesword]

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Many many hearts for you. Love how it ends at the beginning. It was kind of a cracky prompt, but it turned out so, so sweet! good job. <3

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[takenoko]

Haha, there are so many plot holes and random past/present tense mix-ups- and I totally left out the velveteen part so I kind of fail at keeping it to the prompt. XDD But thanks for reading <333

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[xshinystars]

I love this so much, I can't describe it. ♥ Thank you for writing it! (:

I want my own velveteen turtle now lol!

Don't we all? ^^;

[takenoko]

Hee, I'm glad you liked it!

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[razberrycreme]

Gaaah, so cute!! Kame's irritation at Jin hurling him into the water, dies. Thank you for writing ♥

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[takenoko]

You are so very welcome! Thanks for commenting! ♥

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[fukamiru]

asdlasldjasljdad SO SO SO CUTE.

HAHAHA OMG JIN THROWING HIM.

Ueda is so jinius, yes, LOL.

And them kissing in the middle of the ocean. *____*

Your ending was really really funny btw. ♥♥

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[takenoko]

<3333 I'm so glad you liked it! ^^ I figure nothing's more romantic than catching pneumonia in the middle of reuniting with your supposedly-lost soulmate, mm? xP