Dodgy Porn Part 3lip_stick_loveNovember 19 2008, 18:24:20 UTC
And now Kame is almost awake, moving restlessly, and Jin has rolled him onto his stomach so that he is face down against white sheets. Jin has been taking stolen liberties with Kame’s body while he has been sleeping, fingers barely slipping into a place already loose and stretched from before, and this, this is how Jin likes it best with Kame. When Kame is malleable, allowing Jin to do whatever the fuck he wants, when his guard is completely down, the fight gone, and for now Kame is his, belonging utterly to Jin
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Re: Dodgy Porn Part 3gingifereNovember 19 2008, 23:37:52 UTC
I'm always a little bit in love with your writing Tia. It's never just meaningless porn and that's so rare to find. One of my favourite things is your characterisation of Jin--he's desperate and unsure and he wants Kame so much that he doesn't know what to do with himself. I love the idea of KAT-TUN in London, the way Jin feels free and how you gave us some insights into their lives--Kame and his secret world away from Jin, Maru the 'caretaker' (and what an apt description!) and how Jin has never really been able to deal with his attraction to Kame. Seriously, the way you write Akame is incredibly realistic. Thank you for sharing ♥
Re: Dodgy Porn Part 3lip_stick_loveNovember 24 2008, 11:59:23 UTC
Eeeeek!
*blushes*
You're mad, but thank you. Clearly, I can't just write porn (dodgy porn at that). I just can't see Akame as anything other than a hot twisted-screw-up of a mess. I FAIL. But, am glad you liked it sweetie.
Re: Dodgy Porn Part 3flameswordNovember 22 2008, 20:27:56 UTC
Awwwww you did good! I don't find writing porn very hard, but I don't usually find it that interesting, either. It's usually boring to write. This is great stuff though, like Sarah said it has so many layers to it, so much emotion and it's so realistic. Definitely love! Awesome job, with hotness. <3
alskdjfdk i am not here, i am supposed to be nanoing, or something. *runs away*
Re: Dodgy Porn Part 3lip_stick_loveNovember 24 2008, 12:01:07 UTC
God, you lucky thing. I find porn the most difficult thing to write. I usually end up turning it into a LOL-fest, and then have to start again. *face palms*
Um. Thank you very much. Am just glad you liked it. <3<3
Re: Dodgy Porn Part 3tinybarsNovember 23 2008, 21:59:26 UTC
I'm going to echo Sarah's comment, too, about how your porn isn't just porn. It's awesome and brain melting hot, but it's more complex than that. There is backstory and all sorts of interesting things *___* I also love this Jin; desperate and just taking Kame even though he knows what it entails. And Kame kdfslg. It's really how I like to picture Kame in my head. He's part of that world but he also has his own, and I'm a little bit in love with the idea of Jin not knowing at least one fraction of what Kame is. Not sure why...
d,fkdslgs this comment is ridiculous. Just, I really loved this. I always enjoy your writing very much. <3
Re: Dodgy Porn Part 3lip_stick_loveNovember 24 2008, 12:03:29 UTC
gfjgkfjgkfjgkjg.
I'll take brain melting hot any day of the week and twice on Sundays. *DIES*.
I just can't stop turning Akame into a bit of a mess, really, because well. They *are* a bit of a mess I reckon, which is possibly why they are my favourite *favourite* of all J.E. pairings. TEH DRAMA.
Am just happy you liked it. Thank you very, *very* much.
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*blushes*
You're mad, but thank you. Clearly, I can't just write porn (dodgy porn at that). I just can't see Akame as anything other than a hot twisted-screw-up of a mess. I FAIL. But, am glad you liked it sweetie.
*face palms*
You are too kind to me.
*hugs*
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alskdjfdk i am not here, i am supposed to be nanoing, or something. *runs away*
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Um. Thank you very much. Am just glad you liked it. <3<3
Go nano, hehehe.
xxx
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d,fkdslgs this comment is ridiculous. Just, I really loved this. I always enjoy your writing very much. <3
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I'll take brain melting hot any day of the week and twice on Sundays. *DIES*.
I just can't stop turning Akame into a bit of a mess, really, because well. They *are* a bit of a mess I reckon, which is possibly why they are my favourite *favourite* of all J.E. pairings. TEH DRAMA.
Am just happy you liked it. Thank you very, *very* much.
xxx
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And poor Nakamaru, indeed. :-)
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