THE AKAME MASS COMMENT FICCY THING

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Prompt. Write. Stalk. Pimp.
HAVE AT IT.

This entry:
→ Is always second from the top. Not anymore. :D
→ Has no time limits whatsoever, so it can be spammed for as long as you wish. (as much as you want)
→ Is lilmatchgirl007's fault.
→ Is pretty damn awesome, I believe.

An extra note: you can prompt even if you don't plan to write; the idea is porn!, but you can

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Re: evil!Kame part 5

[spiritdream]

“What are you doing?”

Kame seems a little uncertain as he looks down at Jin.

“Untying you.”

Jin glances at Kame’s waist, the smooth, unmarred skin showing invitingly under the shirt as it rides up a little with Kame’s movements. He nervously licks his lips and his throat feels dry as he blurts out his next sentence.

“You don’t have to.”

Kame’s hands freeze on his bounds and Jin’s heart starts to beat a little faster, sleepiness deserting him in a flash as he can feel Kame’s eyes raking over his form. The stare is almost violating in its intensity. It makes his pulse quicken.

He stiffens as Kame slowly caresses his palms then tangles his fingers with his, pushes his legs closer and shifts till he’s straddling Jin’s thighs. Jin holds his breath as Kame smirks and gently kisses his cheek, then shudders as the other’s lips finally rest against his own.

I missed you.Jin slowly opens his mouth and his tongue meets Kame’s halfway, slick, wet heat tangling and sliding against each other while Kame presses his chest against his, forcing

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[risa6chan]

THAT'S SO HOT. HOT is and UNDERSTATEMENT!

OMGGGGG OMFGGG U K KI KILLED JINNN! OMG YOU KILLED JIN!!!!!

This chapter is a KILLER! i died so many times throughout!

THIS IS AWESOME ILU!

I AM GIVING YOU EVERYTHING I HAVE.

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[spiritdream]

YAY! I WILL TAKE GOOD CARE OF IT, don't worry! ♥

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[tinybars]

Oh, Jin. And djfgs Kame. I. You. WHY. ): It is strange but so well done. God. It is good and horrible and hot. And, like someone else already pointed, the parallels to the Shuuji to Akira thing sjff. So good. <3

Kame is kind of great at the mindfuck. D:

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[spiritdream]

The Shuuji to Akira thing wasn't intentional but it's true that I just re-watched Nobuta recently, so maybe... idk.

I believe Kame would be wonderful at mindfuck. He can be very perspective and conscious of other people's emotions and... he could very well stab where it hurts the most, if he wanted to.

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[froidaux]

ksdfjsdk Well. Well. Maybe Kame just has a bloodkink and they're just going have more sex. Right? Right?

SO GOOD. OH SO GOOD SDFKSDJFASDFJ *cries*

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[matchynishi]

YES EXACTLY. You know what is in my heart. aslkgjfksd.

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[froidaux]

We are meant to be Matchy. I WILL ALWAYS BE IN YOUR HEART

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[spiritdream]

... Kame and bloodkink shouldn't be in the same sentence and sound so sexy sdfghj.

*offers hug* ♥

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[froidaux]

*cough* Well. I mean. If you find it inspiring or something feel free to try new things and y'know. :D

♥

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[xshinystars]

I thought the ending so intense. *_____________* Really nicely written~

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[ununoriginal]

this was so wonderfully creepy!

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[kawaiikame]

omg why u kill him kameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *O*
omg poor jin ;__;
i love it really *O*

Re: evil!Kame part 6 end

[solo]

I love this. OMG it's hot, and it's wonderful. And I love it.

Re: evil!Kame part 5

[flamesword]

OMFG THAT IS HOT. YOU WIN AT SEXY EVEN IF THERE ISN'T PORN OMG. *_*

Re: evil!Kame part 5

[risa6chan]

your writing is so damn good that it is easy for the words you used to be deadly embedded into my mind. O___O

i rushed back from lunch just to continue reading this!