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Apr 23, 2009 16:52

Fandom: Guiding Light
Title: beneath the milky twilight
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: PG
Summary: Natalia’s actually kind of embarrassed that she’s asking, because it’s not like she’s thirteen, and yet a blush is creeping its way across her cheeks and she can’t do anything to stop it.
Spoilers: None?
Notes: These two are totally going to have ( Read more... )

olivia/natalia, only love can save the world, femslash, fic

Comments 36

sinjenkai April 23 2009, 21:47:20 UTC

Practice makes perfect

tinyklutzygirl April 23 2009, 22:03:13 UTC

It sure does!

akasarahsmom April 23 2009, 22:28:59 UTC

LOL... Nope. Did you learn nothing from Big Bird!

No one can ever get anything PERFECT...

Practice makes better. You may never reach perfect, but the more you practice the better you get.... so lets just say I'm looking forward to seeing Olivia and Natalia get better, and better, and better..... ;)

Nice work, very sweet. :)

tinyklutzygirl April 23 2009, 22:36:12 UTC

Hahahaha truuuuue. I like that idea.

And thank you, glad you enjoyed!

bellataggart April 23 2009, 21:47:54 UTC

That was very well written. Really enjoyed it :) Well done...

tinyklutzygirl April 23 2009, 22:03:52 UTC

Thank you! My first foray into the GL fandom, so the compliments make me grin!

chilly_flame April 23 2009, 21:49:42 UTC

I'm crazy, crazy about this. So completely right for them--I particularly love your voice for Natalia. Wonderful job. And since I might as well ask (I have no shame), how about a little more just like it?

tinyklutzygirl April 23 2009, 22:05:21 UTC

Wow, thank you for the compliments! Now I feel all warm and fuzzy and stuff.

And I promise, if inspiration of any kind strikes again, I'm sure these two ladies will have more awkward sexual advances to share, haha.

runetraverse April 23 2009, 21:57:12 UTC

Okay, I'm seriously caught between laughing and just an all 'round "awwwwwww." Because seriously, that was funny and cute all at once. Great little piece. ^^

tinyklutzygirl April 23 2009, 22:05:48 UTC

Heehee. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

laughsunshine April 28 2009, 02:43:15 UTC

Ok, I've been dying to ask, what does OTP mean?

tinyklutzygirl April 28 2009, 02:44:58 UTC

'one true pairing' :)

ralst April 23 2009, 22:02:20 UTC

They are so adorably awkward with each other. It's just great.

tinyklutzygirl April 23 2009, 22:06:17 UTC

Aren't they? They just scream cutely awkward to me, I don't know why :) Glad you liked!