Carnality

May 26, 2012 14:50

Author: tinyscribbles80
Title: Carnality
Pairing: Doojoon / Junhyung
Rating: R
Summary: Junhyung is a male prostitute and sex isn’t just fleshly desires
A/N: B2st 100 Fics Challenge | 002. Sex
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The light in his eyes told him that he wanted him to beg )

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babycloud_ai May 26 2012, 09:02:03 UTC
Junhyung ah *sobs*

I'm feeling empty as he is.

I love the way you write this, it's kinda poetic I think and the way you write the sex is just great coz it's not descriptive like ppl tend to do all the time which makes even a good story blah really. I mean, we're already amatuers and to do so just magnifies it!

Great job and hope to see more from you <3

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tinyscribbles80 May 27 2012, 08:31:31 UTC
hehehe thank you for the compliment ^^ if you're feeling empty as he is then I have accomplished inserting that desolateness into the story muahahaha! Thank you for reading ^^

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tinyscribbles80 May 27 2012, 08:34:09 UTC
Yup. It is kinda sad isn't it? Is it true that many people write this pair with that concept? maybe like me I only see tragedy in them? what am I saying? please ignore me. Then I shall strive writing happy stories for them ^^ Thank you for reading ♥

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tinyscribbles80 May 28 2012, 00:40:24 UTC
tsundere... interesting word. What does it mean?

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witwiin May 27 2012, 00:58:21 UTC
great job! this story is pretty sad, i feel for junhyung...
please continue to write 2jun fics!

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tinyscribbles80 May 27 2012, 08:35:44 UTC
Thank you so much for reading ^^ I hope I can write more of 2jun too ♥

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tinyscribbles80 May 28 2012, 00:39:45 UTC
Aww... Thank you for reading ^^ write a happy ending sequel? hmm I would like that too. we'll see. If I do write it you'll be the first one I tell ^^

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