Here's a new set of ficlets up for your viewing pleasure. The first is from a fic trade I did with Shades. We each wanted to see a Papa!Ratch ficlet and so what better way to see one besides doing it yourself? This is my side of the trade.
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PapaRatch is so adorable. Love this story to pieces.
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I particularly liked this juxtaposition (whoo hoo, stand back, I'm using the fancy words, lol) of sentences and thoughts, from Ratchet remembering the P-bots' creation and then the gut wrench of seeing Streetwise fall, even if we know it's just a game:
He’d placed each sparkling within their shells. Streetwise was as much his as any of them were.
And Streetwise had just fallen, paralyzed in the pretend death of the game.
Loved it!
The second one though, I'm gonna have to read the larger version peeking through my fingers and/or hugging a big squishy pillow I think. Firrst Aiiiid, waaaaahhhh ;_;
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