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I Never Thought -
Jul 29, 2005 00:16
I actually really like this one. There are some lines that don't seem to flow, but I like it as a whole (
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silent__bird
July 29 2005, 05:24:45 UTC
maybe "where stars once shined so bright," would fit better. that wasa the only line that didnt seem to flow for me, lol.
Other than that twas fabulous as always. It made me sad though. :( Brava! hehe
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bamabelle24
July 29 2005, 14:53:48 UTC
yeah that is better lol. what was i thinking? haha.
thanks you... and it makes me sad as well, but what do i write that doesn't? lol.
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Other than that twas fabulous as always. It made me sad though. :( Brava! hehe
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thanks you... and it makes me sad as well, but what do i write that doesn't? lol.
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