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tiusan

Tomorrow. Fanfiction. Complete. Doozo.

Jan 03, 2009 02:03

Title: Tomorrow

Pairing: Ohno Satoshi / Ninomiya Kazunari

Summary: For if there is no tomorrow, there will be no Oh-chan.

Rating: PG/PG-13

Disclaimer: I do not own Arashi. I don’t have the money >.<

Genre: Speculative. ^^ (I can’t place it. It’s a mix of self-reflection and life.)

Beta-san: makkuroneko. ありがとう!

Notes: This story was ( Read more... )

Comments 2

bclar January 3 2009, 11:15:05 UTC

That was great! You pictured the Ohno you see very detailed. It is different from the image I have, but your throughout introduction to his way of thinking made me understand him nevertheless. There were some parts I really loved, like the line "how perfect the world feels when I am near him and how it is crushed down to pieces smaller than sand the moment he leaves" or others.

(And, of course, the Ohmiya love at the end. <3)

tiusan January 3 2009, 13:01:39 UTC

Thank you! <3 I wrote it while I was in Belgium and last night we went through it with my beta (though we agreed to disagree about some things xD)
And yeah, I have a slight weakness for a "cynical/planning" Ohno Satoshi. I like how it differs from his usual image ^^ Good you thought it was plausible! *victory sign*