Comments | tkrd: Parinod

tkrd

Parinod

Jun 25, 2005 13:28

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tennisgirl101 June 25 2005, 17:43:51 UTC

Feel better! Have some chicken soup!

tkrd June 25 2005, 17:48:08 UTC

Ty--

Yum...chicken soup...:OP Sounds good!

--Ty

**Author's Note** Don't forget this is a fictional LJ...if you don't know what I mean then go to my Userinfo page for more information :O)
--HGM

festivegirl658 June 26 2005, 03:57:47 UTC

im adding you!
add me back?

tkrd June 26 2005, 04:10:03 UTC

Added you :O)
BTW...love your icon...Corgies are my favorites :O)
--HGM

festivegirl658 June 26 2005, 04:15:26 UTC

thanx my friend found it for me :]

15minutes_late July 3 2005, 20:29:23 UTC

heck yes i did.

waterytones June 26 2005, 14:44:14 UTC

i just finished reading the whole thing! i love the story...it's awesome. Just one thing that i think you should work on: spelling. Just do a little spell-check or read-over before you post. You know, sometimes that's the difference between being taken seriously as an author and...not. Not trying to criticize, just be constructive i guess. :) Good luck...and update soon!!

tkrd June 26 2005, 20:37:58 UTC

You're right...I should spell check...I know I can't spell...but I'm lazy I guess...but I'll start I think...'cause you're right.

Glad you're enjoying it :O)
--HGM

biflamer June 27 2005, 15:50:23 UTC

I thought about that actually as i was reading it, because i found the reading was really difficult - although the story is wonderful!! However, the more i thought about it, the more i realized that the misspellings/bad grammar is almost a wonderful additive to this creation because (in my mind anyway) i felt that everyone's entries occur in a diary - even possibly a blog, and especially in this day and age many people dont' necessarily worry about spelling and grammar. I guess it just makes it a little more authentic. One suggestion (going along with this) is perhaps some of your characters are really good spellers, and others not so much. some might use slang, others might use large superfluous language. many writers may use that to not only distinguish between characters, plus to make it realistic, but also to give a character some background and depth ( ... )

tkrd July 4 2005, 05:01:06 UTC

Sorry it's taken me a while to respond...

Thanks for all your suggestions and ideas! I really apprecate it...I think I'm going to start to spell check my entries...just to make the reading easier. I'd rather it be easier for people to read than for it to be complelty authentic...although authentic is good too :O)
Thanks again and hope you keep reading!
--HGM

festivegirl658 June 26 2005, 20:04:27 UTC

just read most of your LJ, and its pretty good! keep writing and update soon!

tkrd June 26 2005, 20:38:57 UTC

Glad you like it :O)
I'll be updating some time tonight...don't know when...but some time tonight it will happen :O)
--HGM

bordrline June 27 2005, 03:25:35 UTC

Awww hope you feel better!