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[tlkboutgoodtime]

i look up, 
  crickets play their insect violins
 unaware of the solar systems revolving above
 your body sheilds me from the night's bitter cold.
i shift my body twards yours

the moons light deepens your loving gaze.. 
i watch your eyes, and as i do, i neglect the universal glitter, sparkling in the sky

you... 
make the stars seems worthless..

my

Comments

[insomniac57]

I wish I could write like that. I suck at that kinda stuff, but I can draw, haha I'm in honors art. Anyway the poem has that nice warm vibe sorta. I think the to infinity and behind part is kinda weird, only 'cause I don't see where it fits...But your mind is more...complex then mine, hah. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!

heh

[tlkboutgoodtime]

my mind has so many parts, if it was a puzzle it would be one of those 10,000 peice ones.
and i can figure out how to do those..