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tlynnfic

Sensory Experience (BSG)

May 19, 2009 13:05

Title: Sensory Experience
Author: TLynn
Pairing: Adama/Roslin
Rating: PG-13(?)
Word count: 667
Spoilers: none, really

Notes: Written on the fly and without a beta. Any mistakes are mine and mine alone.

Summary: It was dark, the middle of the night, and though he couldn’t see her, his other senses were more acute as a result.

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bsg fic

Comments 31

angiescully May 19 2009, 20:12:27 UTC

Aaah, I had time to read one more piece before bed. I'm glad this popped up. Absolutely gorgeous. ♥

tlynnfic May 21 2009, 01:06:51 UTC

Thank you so much! ♥

icedteainthebag May 19 2009, 20:16:38 UTC

Mmmmmmmmm.
Hold on, let me just think about this for a minute.
Mmmmmmmmm.

Okay. I'm done thinking, I think. For now.

I felt like I'd been waiting for something all day and maybe this is what it is. ♥ I love it so much.

I love the emotional depth, how their touch outside stirs so much inside. All of the things she is to him and he is to her, as much as he can ponder the beauty of it when they're wrapped up like this... it's all there in his touch.

This is amazing.
Her scent filled his nostrils, sweet and rich and decidedly feminine. It covered him, the lingering fragrance of her perfume, something flowery and exotic, mingled with the heady aroma of her arousal and her release. It was intensely human, evidence of baser needs and wants, and combined with that of his own, stirred something deep within him.

I would love to read this exact same scenario from Laura's point of view, actually.

Wonderful wonderful wonderful. :)

tlynnfic May 21 2009, 01:09:23 UTC

As always, I appreciate your feedback SO much, my dear. THANK YOU for the kind words. It puts such a smile on my face to know that you enjoyed this so much.

I would love to read this exact same scenario from Laura's point of view, actually.

Ooh, interesting. I'll have to think about that. I'm rather proud of that little paragraph, so thanks for singling it out. :)

♥

brittania May 20 2009, 00:20:57 UTC

Oh, that was just beautiful. ♥

tlynnfic May 21 2009, 01:09:49 UTC

Thank you! :)

missbevcrusher May 20 2009, 00:30:43 UTC

Loved it. Beautifully written.

tlynnfic May 21 2009, 01:10:08 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!

somadanne May 20 2009, 00:34:24 UTC

That was just ... beautiful, lovely and deep.

tlynnfic May 21 2009, 01:10:48 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)