Sometimes in the morning... my mind can wander quite bit. Two nights ago I picked up my guitar for the first time in forever, and Totally performed things that I didn't think I'd ever be able to do. I even impressed Foy today. Which REALLY means a lot to me; I mean NATE is like one of his best friends who plays
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Sincerly,
Emo-slayer
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That I kinda metaphorically express myself. = not a sentence, asshat
Though there are odd time much like this time, where I kinda slip into a emo-esque void. = Not a sentence and not in the correct tense.
It's something everyone should be able to do. = Whats something everyone should do?? no action in that sentence.
Which can be rather offensive. = take a guess, another sentence fragment.
Try using commas, semicolons, and make some complete sentences.
Thats one paragraph, i'll leave it at that
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