This was a great chapter. Loved how Logan realized right away that there was nothing going on between Wallace and Veronica. I really like the development between Logan and V, how it's been progressing naturally. Especially with the denial all the way there.
The dream: There definitely has to be more of those. You know, with more detail, maybe even have it be real...*innocent smile* Just an idea.
I loved this chapter. I really like how you developed the relationship between Logan and Veronica naturally, and the relationships they both have with Wallace.
Lilly lives is always a scary thing for me bc she has a tendency of ruining things for Veronica and Logan, which clearly you're building up to (or at least her attempt to). I have faith that your Logan and Veronica will be able to make their relationship last though!
Keep going, I can't wait to read what's next. Also, I'm intrigued as to whether you make Veronica be Jake's daughter or not.
hehehe. It's sad how much i love a fictional character. sad. :D...Lilly. gah. If she is their sister...then Duncan won't be with her and then Logan will have a chance...so i think that Lilly is going to fake the results.
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The dream: There definitely has to be more of those. You know, with more detail, maybe even have it be real...*innocent smile*
Just an idea.
Can't wait to read the next chapter
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Lilly lives is always a scary thing for me bc she has a tendency of ruining things for Veronica and Logan, which clearly you're building up to (or at least her attempt to). I have faith that your Logan and Veronica will be able to make their relationship last though!
Keep going, I can't wait to read what's next. Also, I'm intrigued as to whether you make Veronica be Jake's daughter or not.
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:D...Lilly. gah. If she is their sister...then Duncan won't be with her and then Logan will have a chance...so i think that Lilly is going to fake the results.
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