I'm bored and feel like writing poetry

[tnargwoxow]

Ok so firstly I'm gonna do something based around the phrase "My arm smiles back" A lovely emo poem no? :P Now another one?... What's a good phrase or something.. "but it was just the wind I touched

Comments

[anonymous]

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! My vocabulary is not edequate enough to describe it. Just add the most positive adjectives you can think of, and you get my opinion! I LOVE IT!!

xx val

[tnargwoxow]

Awww thanks :D I'm quite happy with this one I think... A bit rushed... But I like :P

[tnargwoxow]

Oops! Lol, Ok it's cut now :P... And romantic imagery is hardly a comment! Bitch ;)

[anonymous]

my jaw is hanging open. Literally. Omg. omg. OMG!!!!!!!
Thats so beautiful... you have no idea. The imagery is amazing. Are u secretly in love with someone? I think that kind of poetry must flow from real emotion. Forget the cliche emo stuff. More of this please!!!!
My poem is just...lame...
no more words, just ohoda;sfh;dksfahasdvbnawhda
seriously.

[tnargwoxow]

Lol, I'm gonna guess that's alyse... But next time please write your name ;) :P.
Lol, no, I'm not in love with anyone. Are you? ;)
Your poem is a million times better than mine! Trust me.. Your poem seriously made my heart skip a beat!

[anonymous]

i lyk dis poem 2 moxymox :D..last 2 lines - nice^^
tis 11.32pm i shuld sleep..byebye~~ AND GIV ME THE POEMS I CHANGED *evil stare*

luv manda

[tnargwoxow]

thanks :) Yeah I like the last line too :). You must have read it just as I left.

[snot_cat]

An imaginary lover? Or someone who once was there but no longer is? ie: death, break-up... Unn.. :x yeah.

GO, UNEDUCATED MIND!

[tnargwoxow]

Lol, yay! :) Good work! Most people only got one and for some reason people all went for the imaginary lover. I wrote it with the death of a lover in my mind but made it more ambiguous with "the wind I gently touched" Instead of "But it was just the wind I touched" Thanks for your reply :)

[snot_cat]

^_^ No probs hun!