Poetry

Oct 31, 2004 13:16


Ok can you please read this and respond? Just read some of them, this is my rhyme poetry, non-rhyme will be in my next post. I know alot of it is suicidal and slitting wrists, please don't complain =P It's fun to write about that sorta stuff. Ok here we go, the better stuff in my opinon is at the top. Although some people like different ones ( Read more... )

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derukureetsu October 31 2004, 00:23:08 UTC
Wow! That took a long time to read. Interesting because you were able to put stuff in rhyme for the most part in the top half.
Interesting.
I tried reading it in different ways, such as rapping, naturally, poetry-type reading and reading like a riddle. Some could have been a riddle. :P

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tnargwoxow October 31 2004, 17:25:12 UTC
Lol, some of them need the writer to explain how it's read... but as long as you enjoyed them it's cool :)

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anonymous March 27 2006, 02:20:03 UTC
look, i'll say this for all your entries coz i cant be bothered commenting on every single one:
YOUR POEMS ROCK!! one day, you will become a famous poet. and if you dont, see me and i'll make sure it allg ets published!

xx val

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