Interesting...."your heart must sometimes feed" and "bleed". Your heart takes in blood...and you lose it. So thus, are you saying that a friend will help to stop the blood from escaping your body, and to help your heart, your "emotions" and "love" to flow on and become stronger? To live on?
"Although you wish you could be freed" "And you really want to bleed". Freedom+Blood = Suicide. Nice. A friend may help you stop suiciding.
"The truth is told there is no test". Nice...showing trust between friends.
The first stanza seems to be about trust and how friends can tell you the truth, and except you to do so too.
The second stanza is a bit harder...because it seems that trust is integrated into it, then, "A friend that can't be bought" is totally different.
Third stanza is about how they can help you from bleeding...from committing suicide...from depression.
Overall, a nice poem, espicially since it rhymes. Nice work yet again Grant. ^.^
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Your heart takes in blood...and you lose it.
So thus, are you saying that a friend will help to stop the blood from escaping your body, and to help your heart, your "emotions" and "love" to flow on and become stronger? To live on?
"Although you wish you could be freed" "And you really want to bleed".
Freedom+Blood = Suicide.
Nice.
A friend may help you stop suiciding.
"The truth is told there is no test". Nice...showing trust between friends.
The first stanza seems to be about trust and how friends can tell you the truth, and except you to do so too.
The second stanza is a bit harder...because it seems that trust is integrated into it, then, "A friend that can't be bought" is totally different.
Third stanza is about how they can help you from bleeding...from committing suicide...from depression.
Overall, a nice poem, espicially since it rhymes.
Nice work yet again Grant. ^.^
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