Abstract Art

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Title: Abstract Art
Length: One-Shot
Pairing: Jaejoong & Yunho
Genre: AU ; romance
Prompt: 'We have our story wrong' from the DBSK Random Pairing Generator
Rating: NC-16
Warning(s): language, booze, drugs, suggestive mentions

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They were never formally together, not ever. The closest they had ever been to actual dating had happened one night on the

Comments

[dapdaphae]

This was beautiful. :) The recklessness that was their relationship (or not-relationship, as the case may be) was gorgeous in its frailty and oh, i just so loved verbal repartees between them.

"What the fuck did you go sleep with her for. You don't even like women. You're gay Jaejoong. Gay."

"Whats the matter Yunho, did I violate your precious little slut. I don't see whats the difference, me fucking her, you fucking her, its all the same, because we both fuck each other."

"Shut up."

God, jaejoong. and yunho. yunho, you jealous prick. ♥ and the ending, hee!

suffice to say, i loved this :)

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I like my Jaejoong and Yunho like this. Reckless + bastardness + them, in my opinion, is always the best. Because to me, everything about Jaejoong just screams 'punk'.

I'm glad that you liked it :)

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askdjjnsadjsak akagasuki recced this out and oh yes, badassery.

:D I love how they treat each other here, the way you wrote out the flippancy, the I-don't-care-but-still, how raw they are with each other. Mmmm good fic is so good.

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Thank you for thinking so <3

[riiche]

Oh my god, I love this. Especially their fight for dominance, yes yes yes. The setting, the language used - rough around the edges and that fits the entire tone of the story so damn well. ...I'm beginning to think I have a thing for badass!DBSK 8'D

Yunho has no answer, because he can't speak out his answer. He opts for pulling his fist back and punching Jaejoong squarely in the jaw before turning to walk away. Because you're mine.)

This. A lot of times men resort to violence with each other, rather than affection, because they simply don't know how else to express themselves. So this paragraph I adored because it's real.

Wonderful fic <3 I'd read this again and again, it's awesome.

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Yes at the dominance. It can never be Yunjae or Jaeho when it comes to both Yunho & Jaejoong. For me, its just Yunho and Jaejoong.

And, yes yes yes - because you totally saw the purpose of that paragraph.

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*major flails* 8Db
You got me so bad man! Here *points to heart*
This is so raw and I lub every bits of them ♥

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I take it you liked it? (:

Well, you're welcome.

[kisaki94]

This fic is so flail worthy, srsly :D

asdfiuhsdfihij ♥ beautiful.

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Glad you thought so!