Comments | todaythesamesky: Fic: She's a Pitcher (pre-Abe/Mihashi, girl!Mihashi, PG)

todaythesamesky

Fic: She's a Pitcher (pre-Abe/Mihashi, girl!Mihashi, PG)

Mar 27, 2011 20:26

Woo, last one!

Title: She's a Pitcher
Fandom: Oofuri
Characters/Pairings: pre-Abe/Mihashi, girl!Mihashi
Rating: G-PG, genderbending
Words: 665
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Written for this Oofurikink prompt, though I did not follow it quite exactly. Born-a-girl!Mihashi AU.

( Abe's first thought is that she's so small )

oofuri, fic

Comments 13

danbi March 28 2011, 00:49:33 UTC

This is so damn cute. I loved it. Haha, especially the part about Tajima not being a girlfriend-stealer (he's my favorite, so I'm biased).

YAY FOR CUTE FIC \o/

todaythesamesky March 28 2011, 00:55:46 UTC

Ah, Bri-sempai! Hi! ♥ I'm so glad you liked it (and obviously Tajima would not be a girlfriend-stealer, as he is a GOOD PERSON).

:D :D :D

danbi March 28 2011, 01:02:44 UTC

Tajima is amazing. And of course I liked it! I like your writing style in general, so as long as I know who the characters are, chances are I'll like it. ;)

ubikono March 28 2011, 01:06:09 UTC

This is too adorable. Abe at first was being very biased because of Mihashi being a girl but then when he saw potential he was all over it. Wanting to "own" Mihashi as a player and Tajima thinking something completely different. It was really fun reading this, it seems believable if Mihashi was a girl.

todaythesamesky April 2 2011, 04:54:41 UTC

Oh, thank you! I'm glad the characterizations worked for you!

aflyingteapot March 28 2011, 11:54:32 UTC

I RE-READ THIS FOR THE NTH TIME BECAUSE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

Abe's first thought is the same thought Mihashi had about Chiyo, now nobody can talk me out of its foreshadowing value

todaythesamesky April 2 2011, 04:55:01 UTC

TEAP THAT MAKES ME SO HAPPY :D

supplanter March 28 2011, 20:26:38 UTC

BWAHAHAHA

Tajima is saying something about her boobs being nice but Abe said he liked her first so he’s not going to be a girlfriend-stealer

... I love you, tajima. :3

(Poor abe. Poor, poor abe. Even more so than usually, I mean. orz)

todaythesamesky April 2 2011, 04:55:38 UTC

I love Tajima too. :) Thanks for commenting!

anonymous July 30 2011, 02:28:14 UTC

OMG! That was so cute! I laughed so hard when I read the ending. I love one-shots, but I'm disappointed that this one ended. Is there perhaps a continuation for this story? I would so read it.

todaythesamesky August 15 2011, 20:29:36 UTC

Awwww, thanks! ♥ I kind of have half-a-sequel in the works, but I haven't written any of it in a while, but, uh, the possibility of more does exist!