things we keep quiet (part i: a girl like wine)

Feb 16, 2009 10:24

one-sided TOP/Gummy; mentions of unrequited Jiyong/TOP (Big Bang)
Within every group of friends there are things that never see the light of day, things that we all keep under covers, things we keep quiet. Big Bang is not an exception.

G for slight angst.

This is the first part of a series of five short one-shots, each based on one Big Bang member.

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length: short (less than 1000), fandom: big bang, series: things we keep quiet, pairing: gummy/top, rating: g

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hybridchickens February 16 2009, 19:30:22 UTC
:D

i love it!! it's almost hauntingly beautiful? LOL. idek, but i really really like it. (:
*mems*

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todefinebeauty February 16 2009, 22:38:43 UTC
Thank you :D I'm glad you like it!

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fullofwishes February 16 2009, 23:49:53 UTC
Ouch. Dismissive it's-not-like-I'm-in-love-but-I-won't-say-I-know-what-love-is Seunghyun.
Oh, it aches. This is lovely.

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todefinebeauty February 17 2009, 18:58:48 UTC
it's-not-like-I'm-in-love-but-I-won't-say-I-know-what-love-is

That's what I was going for :) thank you for reviewing this!

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nishiara_hitomi February 17 2009, 00:43:18 UTC
So beautiful and a subtletly broken. I liked it very much.

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todefinebeauty February 17 2009, 21:19:56 UTC
Aw, thank you for the lovely review :)

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parkchoongjae February 17 2009, 08:06:19 UTC
You don't know how happy I am to be reading a Gummy-TOP fic. OMG. I so love them. They're like my OTP. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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todefinebeauty February 17 2009, 19:16:41 UTC
I hadn't read any other TOP/Gummy fic before writing this but I thought it would make a lovely pairing :D I'm glad you like the pairing as well!

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parkchoongjae February 18 2009, 16:36:39 UTC
Yes. this is like the first. So I am so so so Happy.

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parkchoongjae February 18 2009, 16:38:11 UTC
and you know what? this is just a little suggestion. what about making a Gummy POV? Like she has feelings for TOP too, but she's hesitant to tell him and such. I want a happy ending. XD sorry, you can ignore me really. XD

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todefinebeauty February 17 2009, 21:19:38 UTC
I'm happy you liked this! I'm glad you found it to be a quiet sort of 'love', because that's the kind of feel I was going for :)

I had a bit of trouble over the last line so I'm so glad you thought it fit the fic :D Thank you!

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