I read this back when you posted it and i came back to read it today and just had to comment so excuse the ridiculously late comment.
What truly stands out to me about this is how much you say in so few words. The details, the pacing, the mood it's all wrapped up beautifully and it seems almost effortless how you manage to do so. I rarely read drabbles (and for the life of me can't write them) but this piece said so much more than some one shots that go on and on. And the last bit! the right words to get the scene across of what was happening without changing the tone of it and it just fit seamlessly and ughh just beautiful.
Your writing is simply gorgeous and you have the talent to capture the reader instantly and completely.
Not much more i can say and i don't want to drag this on, but i rarely leave comments even though i should and omg sorry if i just left a big mess of words right here. I just really loved this and am in love with your writing.
Never apologize for a late comment! A comment like this is always wonderful to receive, and I definitely appreciate you leaving a comment even though it's been a while since I posted this.
But really, thank you so much for all your kind words ♥ and for commenting! That is not a mess of words at all - I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that you let me know :)
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What truly stands out to me about this is how much you say in so few words. The details, the pacing, the mood it's all wrapped up beautifully and it seems almost effortless how you manage to do so. I rarely read drabbles (and for the life of me can't write them) but this piece said so much more than some one shots that go on and on. And the last bit! the right words to get the scene across of what was happening without changing the tone of it and it just fit seamlessly and ughh just beautiful.
Your writing is simply gorgeous and you have the talent to capture the reader instantly and completely.
Not much more i can say and i don't want to drag this on, but i rarely leave comments even though i should and omg sorry if i just left a big mess of words right here. I just really loved this and am in love with your writing.
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But really, thank you so much for all your kind words ♥ and for commenting! That is not a mess of words at all - I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that you let me know :)
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