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Of All Days (Eunhyuk/Tablo)

Dec 31, 2010 01:27

Eunhyuk/Tablo (Super Junior/Epik High)
PG, Run/future!AU. 321 words.

For wobaozhewo. The prompt was "quintessential vindication of sacrifice".

So this is minuscule, but... I finished? Haha, there is more of this verse floating around somewhere.

( The projection disappears without a sound, and you're silent but smiling as you tuck the capsule back into your collar, letting it fall under your shirt. )

pairing: eunhyuk/tablo, length: short (less than 1000), rating: pg, fandom: super junior, fandom: epik high

Comments 7

wobaozhewo December 31 2010, 12:06:49 UTC

I love you so goddamn much I could cry right now♥

todefinebeauty January 1 2011, 03:44:06 UTC

♥! I realised after posting and rereading this that there's totally a metaphor for blohyuk fandom somewhere in this.

wobaozhewo January 1 2011, 07:23:35 UTC

Oh? I actually see a bit myself. What're your thoughts 8)

ryeonggu January 1 2011, 05:19:44 UTC

That last paragraph actually made me kind of tear up. Idk why, just that it was absolutely beautiful.

you’re just a kid, and you’re keen, and you’ve yet to realise what your sacrifice means to me, and I know that until the night finally comes, there’s no way you’ll know that I love you without me saying those goddamn words and taking you down with me, except like this. Just loving you, you beautiful, bright boy, and even if I go to hell tomorrow night, I’ll think back on this the very moment before I go. Urgh, my heart. ♥

todefinebeauty January 11 2011, 23:49:17 UTC

Thank you ♥ /bandaids your heart!

rodiy January 3 2011, 08:06:30 UTC

Like Kei said, this is a fantastic example of first person narrative without it being intrusive overbearing or any other examples of DDD: WHY

There's so much going on in so few words and the endless cycle of Blo's thoughts is another reason that makes this believable. In conclusion, YAAAY KAI!

todefinebeauty January 11 2011, 23:50:51 UTC

Kei said that? 8D haha I'm glad! Lately all I've been writing has been first- or second- person POV, so I'm glad that it's something that works in this.

YAAAAY \O//////////// thank you!!