I could quote the whole thing at you, but I'll refrain............... OKAY NO BUT THIS BIT:
Your hair is so long now. It reaches in dark blonde tendrils down your neck, paler than I ever remember, little wet snakes against the picture frame of your collarbones.
We don't need exposition. It's all here. Maybe they've been apart for months, or maybe they've only been apart for a mere few hours, but that doesn't matter. He's seeing him again like it's the first time, like it's the last time; the details have only just (re)occurred to him and he's taking it in like the artistry he sees him as. AND THERE'S SO MUCH MORE I WANT TO SAY, but I'd just end up blathering a wall of text longer than your fic... orz
;__________________; I missed this, Kaiiiii. I missed your words and your written imagery like photographs in little phrases, stark black and blinding white. Howwww do you do that? ♥ ♥ ♥ (the empty spaces between are for you to refill ;;; /corny)
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I could quote the whole thing at you, but I'll refrain............... OKAY NO BUT THIS BIT:
Your hair is so long now. It reaches in dark blonde tendrils down your neck, paler than I ever remember, little wet snakes against the picture frame of your collarbones.
We don't need exposition. It's all here. Maybe they've been apart for months, or maybe they've only been apart for a mere few hours, but that doesn't matter. He's seeing him again like it's the first time, like it's the last time; the details have only just (re)occurred to him and he's taking it in like the artistry he sees him as. AND THERE'S SO MUCH MORE I WANT TO SAY, but I'd just end up blathering a wall of text longer than your fic... orz
;__________________; I missed this, Kaiiiii. I missed your words and your written imagery like photographs in little phrases, stark black and blinding white. Howwww do you do that? ♥ ♥ ♥ (the empty spaces between are for you to refill ;;; /corny)
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