things we keep quiet (part ii: just one night, one shot)

[todefinebeauty]

one-sided Jiyong/Seungri, one-sided Jiyong/TOP (Big Bang)
Within every group of friends there are things that never see the light of day, things that we all keep under covers, things we keep quiet. Big Bang is not an exception.

PG-13 for angst, boys kissing.

This is the second part of a series of five short one-shots, each based on one Big Bang

Comments

[jemnise]

dude. i will save this spot. because i waited for this one!

[jemnise]

but if Jiyong crawls into Seungri’s bed that night, eyes bright and intense and hands desperate against Seungri’s skin, he’ll swallow all words and just let Jiyong forget, and let himself pretend.

AWESOME. LEFT ME SPEECHLESS.

i am all for GTOP. seriously. but this broke my heart that is somehow beating for Baby.

This is what he wanted, after all.
what he wanted. YEA RIGHT. AGH. Baby. you little bubblegumlovepop. <

[todefinebeauty]

Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it even though you're a GTOP fan :P

[parkchoongjae]

omg. that was just heartbreaking for seungri.
gaaaaaaaaaaah. how can this OT3 be this way? Jiyong loves the older Seunghyun - the older Seunghyun loves Gummy and then the younger Seunghyun loves Jiyong? WAAAAAAAAAH. This is sad. :(

I can't wait for the next parts! I love this series!!

[todefinebeauty]

I'm happy you like this series :D I'm not sure when the next parts will be done, since I'm busy with exams and other fics I've been writing.. hopefully they won't be as heartbreaking as the ones I've already posted though ^^ thank you for your comment!

[the_nez]

SPOT BITCHES.

[oxygenlove]

This is just awesome.

I am in love with the way Ri is so willing to take anything he can get, even though he knows every action and "Seunghyun" isn't for him. And it's so beautiful the way his feelings are written all over your words, and how his thoughts are poured down those feelings. It's angsty and sweet as hell, the way RI is so in love with Ji that he's willing to give up his true happiness for anything that resembles it. Even if it's all pretend. Even if it's all play and not real.

Best line:

"He hopes that... Jiyong can see that it doesn’t matter if Seunghyun-hyung doesn’t want him, because this Seunghyun does, and he’s here, can’t you see, hyung?"
This line right here shows a really great way of differentiating the two Seunghyun's in Ji's heart.

Memmed.

[todefinebeauty]

Your comment made me so happy ♥ thank you, that's definitely how I wanted it to come across - Seungri just wanting anything that he could possibly take in place of a requited love, because even if he is ambitious and knows what he wants, he also knows that there are some things he won't be able to have, at least not completely.

Thank you so much for the lovely comment and for memming! My sister keeps saying how awesome your Songs and Agreements series are (I'm pretty sure it's you who wrote them? Haha) but I've never gotten around to reading them - I definitely will after my exams are over, though :D

[oxygenlove]

Your writing had no trouble showing your point. It is so very well expressed. I am comepletely in lve with it. Even though I am a hardcore G-Ri fan and can't really make myself love GTOP fics, this one is an exemption. The way the GTOP love is shown relaly just brings out the G-Ri love more. (so I guess that still means I am biased).

Oh no! Haha! That means you will be having a high expectation when you actually read it! Please don't expect anything. Those fics have many mistakes the grammar police will arrest me for in the future! But I poured out all that I can in them so yeah, when you have the time! Goodluck on your exams!