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Fic: Kill Switch (7/?)

Mar 23, 2013 23:00

Title: Kill Switch
Writer: todesfuge
Status of work: (WIP: 7/?)
Characters: Sherlock/John; Mycroft Holmes, Greg Lestrade, Molly Hooper, Mrs. Hudson, Irene Adler, a whole slew of original characters.
Rating: Somewhere between R and NC-17
Length: 3,393 (this chapter)
Warnings: graphic descriptions of violence, drug use, drug addiction, PTSD, medical trauma, ( Read more... )

sherlock fic, kill switch

Comments 9

alasse_mirimiel March 24 2013, 04:05:31 UTC

Wonderful chapter, one of my favourites so far.

I loved the scene between Moriarty and John. It’s very interesting to have those two characters together because they couldn’t be more different. Moriarty is so much smarter than John that it seems he’ll always have the upper hand but then, he’ll never be able to truly predict how John will act. That means he could make mistakes and what’s more, that he’d be unaware that he’d make a mistake.

I know everyone is suffering but somehow Mycroft is the one I felt more sorry for in this chapter.

So Tunis. Sentiment?

obscuriglobus March 24 2013, 14:03:23 UTC

*on the edge of my seat*

timesink March 24 2013, 14:30:38 UTC

Whump?

todesfuge March 24 2013, 14:32:02 UTC

You want more whump??? LOL (Fear not, we're pulling off the hairy edge in a bit here...well, I say "pulling off...")

timesink March 24 2013, 18:26:41 UTC

No, I mean, what is it? Will I cry if I google it? //googles//. Oh, that's all? Bring it on. I can handle it.

todesfuge March 24 2013, 18:29:43 UTC

Oh oh oh, apparently a British term for ass-kicking. ;-)

rifleman_s March 24 2013, 17:44:42 UTC

"Then he leaned forward again, elbows on his knees, hands cradling his forehead again, a solitary - a lonely - figure in a silent room as night began to fall."

It's amazing how much Sherlock is bound into all their lives, the light around which all the moths flutter.

My biggest concern is the lenght of time it's all taking, while time "runs out" (or at least "away") for Sherlock . . . But that's the mark of a great story-teller, drawing us completely into the story and keeping us on the edge of our seats!

anyrei March 27 2013, 12:46:13 UTC

Amazing chapter.
- a lonely - figure in a silent room as night began to fall. *sigh* I really love your way of writing. so poetic.

The conversation between John and Moriarty was really exciting and my heart really ached when John said goodbye to Sherlock... awww