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[todeskampf]

finished a new song tonight. it's about someone i used to know a long time ago, and what became of her when "what went around" came back around.

please let me know what you think.

Clinical Torment - "Eyes"
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Comments

[mafiaxcourtesan]

let me to be the first to say, this rocks

[ekim_chipter]

are you TRYING to out-Angst Trent??

[todeskampf]

i don't really see how this is all that angsty.

not that angst has ever been a characteristic unique to nine inch nails to begin with.

[ekim_chipter]

I hope you know that I was joking... as always.
Almost everything that comes out of my... fingers (I was going to say mouth, but... ya) is sarcasm.

:D

[psykosis69]

The vox feel different, better. Though, I might suggest a slight reverb so it sounds a little less dry. Maybe on the refrain. Your call, of course.

[bluesucker]

may i ask who it's about...?

[todeskampf]

you don't know her.

[daemonchadeau]

I agree with psykosis69. It needs something on the vocals. Try a slight reverb in different places of the song. However, your have been using your voice better. Have you been practicing or doing some kind of training or anything?

All I have to say is keep this shit coming. It's getting better and better.

[todeskampf]

thanks. and nope, i haven't been doing any training or anything, i've just been coming a bit closer to nailing down what does and doesn't sound good through a distortion pedal. it's fucking tricky at times...