How chapter four fits into the IMR4MR time frame

[43sunsets]

silver_sunn101 wrote: I also see how chapter four fits in once reading The Little Prince, but for some reason it seemed to disrupt the flow of the past story. If chapter four was the present, then Snape telling the story about the little prince in chapters two and three would be the past. It just seemed to throw me off a bit. Once getting into chapter five

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[why_me_why_not]

I personally find the green hard to read for that much text...although it may show up better if you bold it instead of just using plain green. Also, what about the first chapter, which is also on a different timeline? Would you change that as well? Also, are you going to use different colors to signify the different time frames? Like green for 1999, black is obviously the normal timeline for 1993, and red or another color for 91-92?

I know, I'm no help, am I? I just bring up more questions!

[43sunsets]

How about this green?

[silver_sunn101]

You can't really tell that it's green now. It looks more black than anything. Perhaps blue would work better. But I like why_me_why_not's idea about making it bold. That would probably work better.

[43sunsets]

It depends on the brightness of the monitor. In a bright monitor, the green that I used before would be a bit too light to read. In a dark monitor, this green that I use would look black. *sweatdrop*

I'll e-mail you the finished back-story later, BTW.
How was your trip? :-)