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toeveryenemy

Meme Fill

Sep 18, 2011 12:48

Title: Seeing (What Everyone Else Has Seen)
Characters/Pairings: Sam, Dean, past Dean/Lisa
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~4,200
Warnings: curel robo!Sam, chubby!Dean
Note: Fill for chubwinchesters September Fic/Art Meme
Prompt: Ever since his stay at Lisa's Dean has been gaining weight. He was honestly okay with it until soul-less Sam started making cruel comments. ( Read more... )

supernatural fic, chubby!dean, gen

Comments 7

amor_remanet September 19 2011, 04:28:04 UTC

Awww, this was sweet. I loved Dean's embarrassment and his passive-aggressive attempts to spite robo!Sam, and how precious Sammy was when he got his soul back… I even loved robo!Sam's cruel comments. They were perfect for him - snappy, really blunt, a little condescending… you did excellent work capturing his voice.

punkysaidso September 22 2011, 23:57:55 UTC

You captured Dean PERFECTLY. His self-consciousness wasn't over-the-top or too dramatic, it was just right. It sounded so much like him. And I literally cringed at all of Sam's horrible comments. I loved this, I can't stop reading it! Thanks for filling this prompt :D

jules2011 October 2 2011, 11:45:33 UTC

The prompt was really good to start with and I think you did an awesome work with your fill :) I really liked this story!

faithwithers April 3 2012, 00:16:12 UTC

Man, I had forgotten how much of a dick soulless Sam was! I loved the insults though and how they kept coming - little stabs at my heart. It was great, though, and I loved the demon in the end, and "Fat, but able." This was a great story. And then innocent, normal, Sam-and-soul were like *puppy-dog eyes* "I did what?!" It was so cute. Thank you for sharing!

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toeveryenemy February 25 2013, 08:51:28 UTC

I sort of love it when you comment on my old fics because I tend to forget about some of the things I've written. This was definitely one of them, but I just reread it and it isn't half bad. heh. ♥

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toeveryenemy February 25 2013, 18:35:54 UTC

It's only fair considering how often I go through your fic to read my favorites. ;)

And yeahhh, I'm actually partway finished with a fic that was supposed to be a fill for the last comment meme. I have the prompt pasted into my word doc, but I think it might be yours? Where Sam puts on weight at Stanford and Dean has a drinking problem? It's turning into a bigger story than I anticipated so I'm taking a little time with it, but hopefully it'll be finished soon. :) I'm also finishing the sign-up post for the exchange meme which I'm very excited about !

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